Fix many grammar/spelling issues in the script (#543)

* Proof-read Change Edition script

* .

* Proof-read OEM folder script

* Update Change_Edition.cmd

* Update Troubleshoot.cmd

* Update Troubleshoot.cmd

* Update HWID_Activation.cmd

* Update HWID_Activation.cmd

* Update HWID_Activation.cmd

* Update KMS38_Activation.cmd

* Add files via upload

* Update Change_Edition.cmd

* I'm tired

* Update Extract_OEM_Folder.cmd

* Update Troubleshoot.cmd

* Update HWID_Activation.cmd

* Update HWID_Activation.cmd

* Update HWID_Activation.cmd

* finish with hwid

* Update KMS38_Activation.cmd

* final kms38 update

* Update Ohook_Activation_AIO.cmd

* start ohook

* Update Ohook_Activation_AIO.cmd

* Update Online_KMS_Activation.cmd

* Update HWID_Activation.cmd

* Update KMS38_Activation.cmd

* Update Ohook_Activation_AIO.cmd

* Update Online_KMS_Activation.cmd

* Update Change_Edition.cmd

* Update Extract_OEM_Folder.cmd

* Update Troubleshoot.cmd

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Co-authored-by: nekoppai <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: WindowsAddict <[email protected]>

1 files changed, 38 insertions, 37 deletions

diff --git a/MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd b/MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd
index ae3bc02..c906b8a 100644
--- a/MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd
+++ b/MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ set "_debug=0"
 

 ::========================================================================================================================================

 

-::  Set Environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system

+::  Set environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system

 

 setlocal EnableExtensions

 setlocal DisableDelayedExpansion

@@ -191,13 +191,13 @@ call :dk_setvar
 if %winbuild% LSS 7600 (

 %nceline%

 echo Unsupported OS version detected [%winbuild%].

-echo Project is supported for Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalent.

+echo MAS only supports Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalents.

 goto dk_done

 )

 

 ::========================================================================================================================================

 

-::  Fix special characters limitation in path name

+::  Fix special character limitations in path name

 

 set "_work=%~dp0"

 if "%_work:~-1%"=="\" set "_work=%_work:~0,-1%"

@@ -217,8 +217,8 @@ setlocal EnableDelayedExpansion
 echo "!_batf!" | find /i "!_ttemp!" %nul1% && (

 if /i not "!_work!"=="!_ttemp!" (

 %eline%

-echo Script is launched from the temp folder,

-echo Most likely you are running the script directly from the archive file.

+echo The script was launched from the temp folder.

+echo You are most likely running the script directly from the archive file.

 echo:

 echo Extract the archive file and launch the script from the extracted folder.

 goto dk_done

@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ goto dk_done
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b

 %eline%

 echo This script needs admin rights.

-echo To do so, right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.

+echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.

 goto dk_done

 )

 

@@ -318,14 +318,14 @@ if not "%%#"=="" (echo "%%#" | find "127.69" %nul1% && (echo "%%#" | find "127.6
 if defined old (

 echo ________________________________________________

 %eline%

-echo Version %masver% of MAS is outdated.

+echo Your version of MAS [%masver%] is outdated.

 echo ________________________________________________

 echo:

 if not %_unattended%==1 (

 echo [1] Get Latest MAS

 echo [0] Continue Anyway

 echo:

-call :dk_color %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,0] :"

+call :dk_color %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,0] :"

 choice /C:10 /N

 if !errorlevel!==2 rem

 if !errorlevel!==1 (start ht%-%tps://github.com/mass%-%gravel/Microsoft-Acti%-%vation-Scripts & start %mas% & exit /b)

@@ -385,7 +385,7 @@ echo               [9] Download Office
 echo               [0] %_exitmsg%

 echo        ______________________________________________________________

 echo:

-call :dk_color2 %_White% "           " %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,0]"

+call :dk_color2 %_White% "           " %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,0]"

 choice /C:1234567890 /N

 set _el=!errorlevel!

 

@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal
 

 if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe (

 %eline%

-echo [%SysPath%\sppsvc.exe] file is missing. Aborting...

+echo [%SysPath%\sppsvc.exe] file is missing, aborting...

 echo:

 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot

 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"

@@ -508,7 +508,7 @@ if exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-Server*EvalCorEditio
 

 if defined _eval (

 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" /v EditionID %nul2% | find /i "Eval" %nul1% && (

-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Eval Edition                   [Evaluation Editions cannot be activated outside of evaluation period.]"

+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Evaluation Edition             [Evaluation editions cannot be activated outside of evaluation period.]"

 

 if defined _evalserv (

 call :dk_color %Blue% "Go back to main menu and use [Change Edition] option."

@@ -546,7 +546,7 @@ set /a UBR=0
 if %osSKU%==191 if defined altkey if defined altedition (

 for /f "skip=2 tokens=2*" %%a in ('reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" /v UBR %nul6%') do if not errorlevel 1 set /a UBR=%%b

 if %winbuild% LSS 22598 if !UBR! LSS 2788 (

-call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows must to be updated to build 19044.2788 or higher for IotEnterpriseS %KS% activation."

+call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows must be updated to build 19044.2788 or higher for IotEnterpriseS %KS% activation."

 )

 )

 

@@ -557,11 +557,11 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Alternate Edition For %KS%      [%altedition% Act
 if not defined key if not defined _gvlk (

 echo [%winos% ^| %winbuild% ^| SKU:%osSKU%]

 if not defined skunotfound (

-echo This product does not support %KS% Activation.

+echo This product does not support %KS% activation.

 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%unsupported_products_activation

 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%unsupported_products_activation"

 ) else (

-echo Required License files not found in %SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\

+echo Required license files not found in %SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\

 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot

 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"

 )

@@ -574,7 +574,7 @@ goto :ks_office
 ::  Install key

 

 if defined changekey (

-call :dk_color %Blue% "[%altedition%] Edition product key will be used to enable %KS% activation."

+call :dk_color %Blue% "[%altedition%] edition product key will be used to enable %KS% activation."

 echo:

 )

 

@@ -1291,7 +1291,7 @@ reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwarePr
 reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\OfficeSoftwareProtectionPlatform\Policies\0ff1ce15-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663" /f %nul%

 reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\OfficeSoftwareProtectionPlatform\Policies\59a52881-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663" /f %nul%

 

-echo Clearing Office License Blocks          [Successfully Cleared From All %counter% Useraccounts]

+echo Clearing Office License Blocks          [Successfully cleared from all %counter% user accounts]

 

 ::==========================

 

@@ -1309,7 +1309,7 @@ for %%# in (%_sidlist%) do (
 reg delete HKU\%%#\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\Licensing\Resiliency /f %nul%

 reg add HKU\%%#\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\Licensing\Resiliency /v "TimeOfLastHeartbeatFailure" /t REG_SZ /d "2040-01-01T00:00:00Z" /f %nul%

 )

-echo Adding Reg Keys To Skip License Check   [Successfully Added To All %counter% ^& Future New Useraccounts]

+echo Adding Reg Keys to Skip License Check   [Successfully added to all %counter% ^& future new user accounts]

 )

 

 ::==========================

@@ -1323,14 +1323,14 @@ reg query HKU\%%# %nul% && set failedtounload=1
 

 if defined failedtoload (

 set error=1

-call :dk_color %Red% "Loading Unloaded accounts Registry      [Failed For Some Useraccounts]"

-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system and try again."

+call :dk_color %Red% "Loading Unloaded Accounts Registry      [Failed for some user accounts]"

+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system and try again."

 )

 

 if defined failedtounload (

 set error=1

-call :dk_color %Red% "Unloading loaded accounts Registry      [Failed For Some Useraccounts]"

-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system and try again."

+call :dk_color %Red% "Unloading Loaded Account Registries     [Failed for some user accounts]"

+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system and try again."

 )

 

 exit /b

@@ -2573,7 +2573,7 @@ set pupfound=%pupfound1%%pupfound2%
 set hcount=0

 for %%# in (avira.com kaspersky.com virustotal.com mcafee.com) do (

 find /i "%%#" %SysPath%\drivers\etc\hosts %nul% && set /a hcount+=1)

-if %hcount%==4 set "results=[AV URLs are blocked in hosts]"

+if %hcount%==4 set "results=[Antivirus URLs are blocked in hosts]"

 

 set wucount=0

 for %%# in (wuauserv) do (

@@ -2582,7 +2582,7 @@ for %%G in (DependOnService Description DisplayName ErrorControl ImagePath Objec
 reg query HKLM\SYSTEM\CurrentControlSet\Services\%%# /v %%G %nul% || (set _corrupt=1 & set /a wucount+=1)

 )

 )

-if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[WU registry is corrupt]"

+if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[Windows Update registry is corrupt]"

 

 sc start sppsvc %nul%

 echo "%errorlevel%" | findstr "577 225" %nul% && (

@@ -2593,7 +2593,8 @@ if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe if not exist %SysPath%\alg.exe (set "results=%
 

 if not "%results%%pupfound%"=="" (

 if defined pupfound call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking PUP Activators                 [Found%pupfound%]"

-if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection     %results%"

+if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection..."

+if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "%results%"

 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%remove_mal%w%ware

 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%remove_mal%w%ware"

 echo:

@@ -2612,7 +2613,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal
 sc query Null %nul% || (

 set error=1

 set showfix=1

-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found. Script may not work properly.]"

+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found, script may not work properly.]"

 call :dk_color %Blue% "If you are using any third-party antivirus, check if it is blocking the script."

 echo:

 )

@@ -2703,7 +2704,7 @@ if defined serv_e (
 set error=1

 call :dk_color %Red% "Starting Services                       [Failed] [%serv_e%]"

 echo %serv_e% | findstr /i "ClipSVC-1058 sppsvc-1058" %nul% && (

-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system to fix this error."

+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system to fix this error."

 set showfix=1

 )

 )

@@ -2743,7 +2744,7 @@ for /f "delims=" %%a in ('%psc% "$f=[io.file]::ReadAllText('!_batp!') -split ':w
 echo "%wpainfo%" | find /i "Error Found" %nul% && (

 set error=1

 set wpaerror=1

-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Error             [%wpainfo%]"

+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Errors            [%wpainfo%]"

 ) || (

 echo Checking WPA Registry Count             [%wpainfo%]

 )

@@ -2782,7 +2783,7 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Checking License Files                  [Not Found] [%osed
 

 if not exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-*-%osedition%-*.mum" (

 set error=1

-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package File                   [Not Found] [%osedition%]"

+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package Files                  [Not Found] [%osedition%]"

 )

 )

 )

@@ -2853,7 +2854,7 @@ echo Checking Eval WLMS Service              [Found]
 

 reg query "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" %nul% || (

 set error=1

-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Reg               [Not Found]"

+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Registry          [Not Found]"

 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot

 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"

 )

@@ -2878,7 +2879,7 @@ set error=1
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\Plugins\Objects\msft:rm/algorithm/hwid/4.0" /f ba02fed39662 /d %nul% || (

 call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Registry Key               [Incorrect ModuleId Found]"

 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers

-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Possibly Caused By Gaming Spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"

+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Most likely caused by HWID spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"

 set error=1

 set showfix=1

 )

@@ -2908,9 +2909,9 @@ set "d=!d! $AclObject.SetSecurityDescriptorSddlForm($sddl);"
 set "d=!d! Set-Acl -Path %tokenstore% -AclObject $AclObject;"

 %psc% "!d!" %nul%

 if exist "%tokenstore%\" (

-call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found. Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"

+call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"

 ) else (

-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found. Failed To Create] [%tokenstore%\]"

+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Failed to Create] [%tokenstore%\]"

 set error=1

 set showfix=1

 )

@@ -3028,7 +3029,7 @@ if ($osVersion.Build -ge $minBuildNumber) {
     }

     for ($i=1; $i -le $count; $i++) {

         if (-not $subkeyHashTable.ContainsKey("$i")) {

-            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found- $i key does not exist"

+            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found - $i key does not exist."

 			$wpaKey.Close()

 			exit

         }

@@ -3039,7 +3040,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
         if ($PSVersionTable.PSVersion.Major -lt 3) {

             cmd /c "reg query "HKLM\SYSTEM\WPA\$_" /ve /t REG_BINARY >nul 2>&1"

 			if ($LASTEXITCODE -ne 0) {

-            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found- Binary Data is corrupt"

+            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."

 			$wpaKey.Close()

 			exit

 			}

@@ -3047,7 +3048,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
             $subkey = $wpaKey.OpenSubKey($_)

             $p = $subkey.GetValueNames()

             if (($p | Where-Object { $subkey.GetValueKind($_) -eq [Microsoft.Win32.RegistryValueKind]::Binary }).Count -eq 0) {

-                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found- Binary Data is corrupt"

+                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."

 				$wpaKey.Close()

 				exit

             }

@@ -3086,13 +3087,13 @@ echo:
 if %_unattended%==1 timeout /t 2 & exit /b

 

 if defined fixes (

-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] To Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] To Ignore"

+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] to Ignore"

 choice /C:10 /N

 if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))

 )

 

 if defined terminal (

-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 0 key to %_exitmsg%..."

+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."

 choice /c 0 /n

 ) else (

 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."