From 19be25c02969cee1d8e896d012a42f586264f1e9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lyssa Date: Tue, 20 Aug 2024 12:15:06 -0500 Subject: Fix many grammar/spelling issues in the script (#543) * Proof-read Change Edition script * . * Proof-read OEM folder script * Update Change_Edition.cmd * Update Troubleshoot.cmd * Update Troubleshoot.cmd * Update HWID_Activation.cmd * Update HWID_Activation.cmd * Update HWID_Activation.cmd * Update KMS38_Activation.cmd * Add files via upload * Update Change_Edition.cmd * I'm tired * Update Extract_OEM_Folder.cmd * Update Troubleshoot.cmd * Update HWID_Activation.cmd * Update HWID_Activation.cmd * Update HWID_Activation.cmd * finish with hwid * Update KMS38_Activation.cmd * final kms38 update * Update Ohook_Activation_AIO.cmd * start ohook * Update Ohook_Activation_AIO.cmd * Update Online_KMS_Activation.cmd * Update HWID_Activation.cmd * Update KMS38_Activation.cmd * Update Ohook_Activation_AIO.cmd * Update Online_KMS_Activation.cmd * Update Change_Edition.cmd * Update Extract_OEM_Folder.cmd * Update Troubleshoot.cmd --------- Co-authored-by: nekoppai <109633131+nekoppai@users.noreply.github.com> Co-authored-by: WindowsAddict --- .../Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd | 75 +++++++++++----------- 1 file changed, 38 insertions(+), 37 deletions(-) (limited to 'MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd') diff --git a/MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd b/MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd index ae3bc02..c906b8a 100644 --- a/MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd +++ b/MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ set "_debug=0" ::======================================================================================================================================== -:: Set Environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system +:: Set environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system setlocal EnableExtensions setlocal DisableDelayedExpansion @@ -191,13 +191,13 @@ call :dk_setvar if %winbuild% LSS 7600 ( %nceline% echo Unsupported OS version detected [%winbuild%]. -echo Project is supported for Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalent. +echo MAS only supports Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalents. goto dk_done ) ::======================================================================================================================================== -:: Fix special characters limitation in path name +:: Fix special character limitations in path name set "_work=%~dp0" if "%_work:~-1%"=="\" set "_work=%_work:~0,-1%" @@ -217,8 +217,8 @@ setlocal EnableDelayedExpansion echo "!_batf!" | find /i "!_ttemp!" %nul1% && ( if /i not "!_work!"=="!_ttemp!" ( %eline% -echo Script is launched from the temp folder, -echo Most likely you are running the script directly from the archive file. +echo The script was launched from the temp folder. +echo You are most likely running the script directly from the archive file. echo: echo Extract the archive file and launch the script from the extracted folder. goto dk_done @@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ goto dk_done if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b %eline% echo This script needs admin rights. -echo To do so, right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'. +echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'. goto dk_done ) @@ -318,14 +318,14 @@ if not "%%#"=="" (echo "%%#" | find "127.69" %nul1% && (echo "%%#" | find "127.6 if defined old ( echo ________________________________________________ %eline% -echo Version %masver% of MAS is outdated. +echo Your version of MAS [%masver%] is outdated. echo ________________________________________________ echo: if not %_unattended%==1 ( echo [1] Get Latest MAS echo [0] Continue Anyway echo: -call :dk_color %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,0] :" +call :dk_color %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,0] :" choice /C:10 /N if !errorlevel!==2 rem if !errorlevel!==1 (start ht%-%tps://github.com/mass%-%gravel/Microsoft-Acti%-%vation-Scripts & start %mas% & exit /b) @@ -385,7 +385,7 @@ echo [9] Download Office echo [0] %_exitmsg% echo ______________________________________________________________ echo: -call :dk_color2 %_White% " " %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,0]" +call :dk_color2 %_White% " " %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,0]" choice /C:1234567890 /N set _el=!errorlevel! @@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe ( %eline% -echo [%SysPath%\sppsvc.exe] file is missing. Aborting... +echo [%SysPath%\sppsvc.exe] file is missing, aborting... echo: set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot" @@ -508,7 +508,7 @@ if exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-Server*EvalCorEditio if defined _eval ( reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" /v EditionID %nul2% | find /i "Eval" %nul1% && ( -call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Eval Edition [Evaluation Editions cannot be activated outside of evaluation period.]" +call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Evaluation Edition [Evaluation editions cannot be activated outside of evaluation period.]" if defined _evalserv ( call :dk_color %Blue% "Go back to main menu and use [Change Edition] option." @@ -546,7 +546,7 @@ set /a UBR=0 if %osSKU%==191 if defined altkey if defined altedition ( for /f "skip=2 tokens=2*" %%a in ('reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" /v UBR %nul6%') do if not errorlevel 1 set /a UBR=%%b if %winbuild% LSS 22598 if !UBR! LSS 2788 ( -call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows must to be updated to build 19044.2788 or higher for IotEnterpriseS %KS% activation." +call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows must be updated to build 19044.2788 or higher for IotEnterpriseS %KS% activation." ) ) @@ -557,11 +557,11 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Alternate Edition For %KS% [%altedition% Act if not defined key if not defined _gvlk ( echo [%winos% ^| %winbuild% ^| SKU:%osSKU%] if not defined skunotfound ( -echo This product does not support %KS% Activation. +echo This product does not support %KS% activation. set fixes=%fixes% %mas%unsupported_products_activation call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%unsupported_products_activation" ) else ( -echo Required License files not found in %SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\ +echo Required license files not found in %SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\ set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot" ) @@ -574,7 +574,7 @@ goto :ks_office :: Install key if defined changekey ( -call :dk_color %Blue% "[%altedition%] Edition product key will be used to enable %KS% activation." +call :dk_color %Blue% "[%altedition%] edition product key will be used to enable %KS% activation." echo: ) @@ -1291,7 +1291,7 @@ reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwarePr reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\OfficeSoftwareProtectionPlatform\Policies\0ff1ce15-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663" /f %nul% reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\OfficeSoftwareProtectionPlatform\Policies\59a52881-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663" /f %nul% -echo Clearing Office License Blocks [Successfully Cleared From All %counter% Useraccounts] +echo Clearing Office License Blocks [Successfully cleared from all %counter% user accounts] ::========================== @@ -1309,7 +1309,7 @@ for %%# in (%_sidlist%) do ( reg delete HKU\%%#\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\Licensing\Resiliency /f %nul% reg add HKU\%%#\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\Licensing\Resiliency /v "TimeOfLastHeartbeatFailure" /t REG_SZ /d "2040-01-01T00:00:00Z" /f %nul% ) -echo Adding Reg Keys To Skip License Check [Successfully Added To All %counter% ^& Future New Useraccounts] +echo Adding Reg Keys to Skip License Check [Successfully added to all %counter% ^& future new user accounts] ) ::========================== @@ -1323,14 +1323,14 @@ reg query HKU\%%# %nul% && set failedtounload=1 if defined failedtoload ( set error=1 -call :dk_color %Red% "Loading Unloaded accounts Registry [Failed For Some Useraccounts]" -call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system and try again." +call :dk_color %Red% "Loading Unloaded Accounts Registry [Failed for some user accounts]" +call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system and try again." ) if defined failedtounload ( set error=1 -call :dk_color %Red% "Unloading loaded accounts Registry [Failed For Some Useraccounts]" -call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system and try again." +call :dk_color %Red% "Unloading Loaded Account Registries [Failed for some user accounts]" +call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system and try again." ) exit /b @@ -2573,7 +2573,7 @@ set pupfound=%pupfound1%%pupfound2% set hcount=0 for %%# in (avira.com kaspersky.com virustotal.com mcafee.com) do ( find /i "%%#" %SysPath%\drivers\etc\hosts %nul% && set /a hcount+=1) -if %hcount%==4 set "results=[AV URLs are blocked in hosts]" +if %hcount%==4 set "results=[Antivirus URLs are blocked in hosts]" set wucount=0 for %%# in (wuauserv) do ( @@ -2582,7 +2582,7 @@ for %%G in (DependOnService Description DisplayName ErrorControl ImagePath Objec reg query HKLM\SYSTEM\CurrentControlSet\Services\%%# /v %%G %nul% || (set _corrupt=1 & set /a wucount+=1) ) ) -if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[WU registry is corrupt]" +if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[Windows Update registry is corrupt]" sc start sppsvc %nul% echo "%errorlevel%" | findstr "577 225" %nul% && ( @@ -2593,7 +2593,8 @@ if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe if not exist %SysPath%\alg.exe (set "results=% if not "%results%%pupfound%"=="" ( if defined pupfound call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking PUP Activators [Found%pupfound%]" -if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection %results%" +if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection..." +if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "%results%" set fixes=%fixes% %mas%remove_mal%w%ware call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%remove_mal%w%ware" echo: @@ -2612,7 +2613,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal sc query Null %nul% || ( set error=1 set showfix=1 -call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing [Found. Script may not work properly.]" +call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing [Found, script may not work properly.]" call :dk_color %Blue% "If you are using any third-party antivirus, check if it is blocking the script." echo: ) @@ -2703,7 +2704,7 @@ if defined serv_e ( set error=1 call :dk_color %Red% "Starting Services [Failed] [%serv_e%]" echo %serv_e% | findstr /i "ClipSVC-1058 sppsvc-1058" %nul% && ( -call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system to fix this error." +call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system to fix this error." set showfix=1 ) ) @@ -2743,7 +2744,7 @@ for /f "delims=" %%a in ('%psc% "$f=[io.file]::ReadAllText('!_batp!') -split ':w echo "%wpainfo%" | find /i "Error Found" %nul% && ( set error=1 set wpaerror=1 -call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Error [%wpainfo%]" +call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Errors [%wpainfo%]" ) || ( echo Checking WPA Registry Count [%wpainfo%] ) @@ -2782,7 +2783,7 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Checking License Files [Not Found] [%osed if not exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-*-%osedition%-*.mum" ( set error=1 -call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package File [Not Found] [%osedition%]" +call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package Files [Not Found] [%osedition%]" ) ) ) @@ -2853,7 +2854,7 @@ echo Checking Eval WLMS Service [Found] reg query "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" %nul% || ( set error=1 -call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Reg [Not Found]" +call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Registry [Not Found]" set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot" ) @@ -2878,7 +2879,7 @@ set error=1 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\Plugins\Objects\msft:rm/algorithm/hwid/4.0" /f ba02fed39662 /d %nul% || ( call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Registry Key [Incorrect ModuleId Found]" set fixes=%fixes% %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers -call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Possibly Caused By Gaming Spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers" +call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Most likely caused by HWID spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers" set error=1 set showfix=1 ) @@ -2908,9 +2909,9 @@ set "d=!d! $AclObject.SetSecurityDescriptorSddlForm($sddl);" set "d=!d! Set-Acl -Path %tokenstore% -AclObject $AclObject;" %psc% "!d!" %nul% if exist "%tokenstore%\" ( -call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder [Not Found. Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]" +call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder [Not Found, Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]" ) else ( -call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder [Not Found. Failed To Create] [%tokenstore%\]" +call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder [Not Found, Failed to Create] [%tokenstore%\]" set error=1 set showfix=1 ) @@ -3028,7 +3029,7 @@ if ($osVersion.Build -ge $minBuildNumber) { } for ($i=1; $i -le $count; $i++) { if (-not $subkeyHashTable.ContainsKey("$i")) { - Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found- $i key does not exist" + Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found - $i key does not exist." $wpaKey.Close() exit } @@ -3039,7 +3040,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object { if ($PSVersionTable.PSVersion.Major -lt 3) { cmd /c "reg query "HKLM\SYSTEM\WPA\$_" /ve /t REG_BINARY >nul 2>&1" if ($LASTEXITCODE -ne 0) { - Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found- Binary Data is corrupt" + Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt." $wpaKey.Close() exit } @@ -3047,7 +3048,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object { $subkey = $wpaKey.OpenSubKey($_) $p = $subkey.GetValueNames() if (($p | Where-Object { $subkey.GetValueKind($_) -eq [Microsoft.Win32.RegistryValueKind]::Binary }).Count -eq 0) { - Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found- Binary Data is corrupt" + Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt." $wpaKey.Close() exit } @@ -3086,13 +3087,13 @@ echo: if %_unattended%==1 timeout /t 2 & exit /b if defined fixes ( -call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] To Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] To Ignore" +call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] to Ignore" choice /C:10 /N if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#)) ) if defined terminal ( -call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 0 key to %_exitmsg%..." +call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..." choice /c 0 /n ) else ( call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..." -- cgit v1.2.3