Grammar fixes from Lyssa

_site/bypass-russian-geoblock.html

@@ -424,27 +424,27 @@ Microsoft page</a>.</p>
 <h3>Solution</h3>
 <p><a href="/msdl/">MSDL</a></p>
 <p>It uses shared sessions/proxy to generate official download links in
-Russia and in all other blocked places.</p>
+Russia and all other blocked places.</p>
 <hr />
 </div>
 </div>
 <div id="office-download" class="section level2">
 <h2>Office Download</h2>
 <p>Russian users face an error when they try to <a
-href="genuine-installation-media.html">download</a> Office C2R with
+href="genuine-installation-media.html">download</a> Office C2R with the
 online installer or ODT.</p>
 <div id="error-1" class="section level3">
 <h3>Error</h3>
 <pre><code>Command not supported
 We&#39;re sorry, we can&#39;t continue because we weren&#39;t able to download a required file. Please make sure you&#39;re connected to the internet or connect to a different network, then try again.</code></pre>
 <p><img src="https://lookimg.com/images/2023/03/24/QTAO3s.png" /></p>
-<div id="how-microsoft-is-blocking-it" class="section level4">
+<div id="how-is-microsoft-blocking-it" class="section level4">
-<h4>How Microsoft is blocking it?</h4>
+<h4>How is Microsoft blocking it?</h4>
-<p>It’s primarily checking Russian IP address and basis on that above
+<p>Primarily, it checks for Russian IP addresses, and based on that, the
-error is shown to users. However that’s not the end of it. Once it find
+above error is shown to users. However that’s not the end of it. Once it
-out that Russian IP is used then installer creates a below registry key
+find out that Russian IP is used, the installer creates the registry key
-to remember it. After that if you even use a VPN then installer will
+below to remember it. After that, even if you use a VPN, the installer
-still keep showing the error.</p>
+will still keep showing the error.</p>
 <pre><code>[HKEY_CURRENT_USER\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\ExperimentConfigs\Ecs]
 &quot;CountryCode&quot;=&quot;std::wstring|RU&quot;</code></pre>
 </div>
@@ -453,10 +453,10 @@ still keep showing the error.</p>
 <h3>Solution</h3>
 <p><strong>1-</strong> Open command prompt as admin and enter,</p>
 <pre><code>reg add &quot;HKCU\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\ExperimentConfigs\Ecs&quot; /v &quot;CountryCode&quot; /t REG_SZ /d &quot;std::wstring|US&quot; /f</code></pre>
-<p>After that office installer won’t show any such errors. You can apply
+<p>After that, the office installer won’t show any related errors. You
-this before or after running the Office installer and you can download
+can apply this before or after running the Office installer and you can
-Office without any VPN and with your Russian IP address.</p>
+download Office without any VPN with your Russian IP address.</p>
-<p><strong>2-</strong> Use <a href="office_c2r_links.html">Offline
+<p><strong>2-</strong> Use the <a href="office_c2r_links.html">Offline
 installer file</a> to install Office.</p>
 <hr />
 <p>Please let us <a href="contactus.html">know</a> if you face any

_site/change_edition.html

@@ -410,9 +410,9 @@ div.tocify {
 <hr />
 <ul>
 <li><p>You can find this option in the MAS extras section.</p></li>
-<li><p>It can change the Windows 7-8-8.1-10-11 and equivalent Server
+<li><p>It can change the Windows 7-8-8.1-10-11 and their Server
-Editions.</p></li>
+equivalent editions.</p></li>
-<li><p>Script incorporates 4 methods for edition change:</p>
+<li><p>The script incorporates 4 methods for edition changing:</p>
 <ul>
 <li>Alex (aka may, ave9858) DISM Api Method (Based on changepk.exe
 method but better)<br />
@@ -424,16 +424,16 @@ method but better)<br />
 <li><a href="https://github.com/asdcorp/Set-WindowsCbsEdition">CBS
 Upgrade method</a></li>
 </ul></li>
-<li><p>Available editions for change are shown in the script basis on
+<li><p>Available editions that can be changed to are shown in the script
-all these 4 options.</p></li>
+based on all these 4 options.</p></li>
-<li><p>The script is future proof, which means on the release of new
+<li><p>The script is future-proof, which means that upon the release of
-Windows / Server editions, the script doesn’t need an update and can get
+new Windows / Server editions, the script won’t need an update and can
-the required key from the system itself.</p></li>
+get the required product key from the system itself.</p></li>
-<li><p>Script blocks the change to CountrySpecific, ServerRdsh and
+<li><p>The script blocks changing to CountrySpecific, ServerRdsh and
 to/from CloudEdition editions since it’s officially not supported and
 the user may face issues.</p></li>
-<li><p>The script can not change the Non-Core (Pro, Enterprise, etc) to
+<li><p>The script cannot change Non-Core editions to Core editions. (For
-Core (Home) edition.</p></li>
+example, Pro –&gt; Home isn’t available)</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
 </div>

_site/check_activation_status.html

@@ -408,33 +408,33 @@ div.tocify {
 <div id="check-activation-status" class="section level1">
 <h1>Check Activation Status</h1>
 <hr />
-<p>MAS includes checking activation options (WMI/VBS) which are taken
+<p>MAS includes 2 scripts for checking activation status in Windows and
-from abbodi1406’s <a
+Office (WMI, VBS) which are taken from abbodi1406’s <a
 href="https://github.com/abbodi1406/KMS_VL_ALL_AIO/">KMS_VL_ALL</a>.<br />
-It checks the status of Windows and Office products.</p>
+</p>
-<p>Please find below the difference between vbs and wmi options.</p>
+<p>Read below to see the differences between the 2 scripts.</p>
 <hr />
 <div id="check-activation-status-vbs" class="section level2">
-<h2>Check Activation Status [vbs]</h2>
+<h2>Check Activation Status [VBS]</h2>
 <ul>
-<li><p>Query and execute official licensing VBScripts: slmgr.vbs for
+<li><p>Queries and executes official licensing VBScripts: slmgr.vbs for
-Windows, ospp.vbs for Office</p></li>
+Windows, ospp.vbs for Office.</p></li>
-<li><p>Shows the activation expiration date for Windows</p></li>
+<li><p>Shows the activation expiration date for Windows.</p></li>
-<li><p>Office 2010 ospp.vbs shows a very little info</p></li>
+<li><p>Office 2010 ospp.vbs shows very little information.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
 </div>
 <div id="check-activation-status-wmi" class="section level2">
-<h2>Check Activation Status [wmi]</h2>
+<h2>Check Activation Status [WMI]</h2>
 <ul>
-<li><p>Query and execute WMI functions using wmic.exe or
+<li><p>Queries and executes WMI functions using wmic.exe or
-VBScripts</p></li>
+VBScripts.</p></li>
-<li><p>Shows extra info (SKU ID, key channel)</p></li>
+<li><p>Shows extra information (SKU ID, key channel).</p></li>
-<li><p>Shows the activation expiration date for all products</p></li>
+<li><p>Shows the activation expiration date for all products.</p></li>
-<li><p>Shows more detailed info for Office 2010</p></li>
+<li><p>Shows more detailed information for Office 2010.</p></li>
-<li><p>Can show the status of Office UWP apps</p></li>
+<li><p>Can show the status of Office UWP apps.</p></li>
 <li><p>Implement vNextDiag.ps1 functions to <strong>detect new Office
-365 vNext licenses and subscriptions</strong></p></li>
+365 vNext licenses and subscriptions</strong>.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
 </div>

_site/command_line_switches.html

@@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ with this.</td>
 <div id="uses-in-powershell-one-liner" class="section level2">
 <h2>Uses In Powershell One Liner</h2>
 <p><code>&amp; ([ScriptBlock]::Create((irm https://mass grave.dev/get))) /para</code></p>
-<p>Note - Remove space between <code>mass grave</code></p>
+<p>Note - Remove the space between <code>mass grave</code></p>
 <ul>
 <li>Replace <code>/para</code> in this command with the switches from
 the above table. You can also use multiple switches. For example,
@@ -546,7 +546,7 @@ version scripts.</p></li>
 be separated with spaces.</p></li>
 <li><p>KMS Uninstall switch will take precedence over other KMS
 switches.</p></li>
-<li><p>KMS38 remove protection switch will task precedence over KMS38
+<li><p>KMS38 remove protection switch will take precedence over KMS38
 activation.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />

_site/contactus.html

@@ -409,7 +409,7 @@ div.tocify {
 <h1>Contact Us</h1>
 <hr />
 <p>Please feel free to share feedback regarding bug reports,
-documentation errors, troubleshooting, etc.</p>
+documentation errors, troubleshooting, etc. using the links below.</p>
 <ul>
 <li><p><a href="https://discord.gg/gjJEfq7ux8">Discord</a> ❤️ (signup
 not required) - Discussion</p></li>

_site/credits.html

@@ -407,9 +407,9 @@ div.tocify {
 
 <div id="credits" class="section level1">
 <h1>Credits</h1>
-<p>MAS project wouldn’t be possible without kind help and uses of other
+<p>The MAS project wouldn’t be possible without the kind help and use of
-honorable developer’s tools and scripts. I would like to say thanks to
+other honorable developers’ tools and scripts. I would like to say
-all those wonderful people and projects.</p>
+thanks to all those wonderful people and projects.</p>
 <table>
 <colgroup>
 <col width="30%" />

_site/faq.html

@@ -416,12 +416,12 @@ method.</strong></p>
 </strong>Check the info <a
 href="index.html#Download__How_to_use_it">here</a>.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>How to activate Windows permanently?</strong><br />
-Use HWID option in MAS.</p></li>
+Use the HWID option in MAS.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>How to download and install Office?</strong><br />
 Check the info <a
 href="genuine-installation-media.html">here</a>.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>How to activate Office permanently?</strong><br />
-Use Ohook option in MAS.</p></li>
+Use the Ohook option in MAS.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>It says activation failed, what to do now?</strong><br />
 Check <a href="troubleshoot.html">here</a>.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>How to download the full version of Windows 10 LTSC
@@ -433,23 +433,23 @@ Windows is deactivated.</strong><br />
 Run HWID activation to activate Pro. Each edition requires separate
 activation.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>How to remove HWID activation?</strong><br />
-You can not remove it, same as you can not remove official Windows
+You cannot remove it, just like you cannot remove an official Windows
-digital (HWID) license. Once a system is activated, this activation
+digital license. Once a system is activated, this activation cannot be
-cannot be removed because the license is stored in the Microsoft servers
+removed because the license is stored in the Microsoft servers and not
-and not in the user’s system. MS checks the hardware ID (HWID) and if a
+in the user’s system. MS checks the hardware ID (HWID) and if a license
-license is found in their database, the system will automatically
+is found in their database, the system will automatically
 activate.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>How to remove Ohook, KMS38, Online KMS
 activation?</strong><br />
 <a href="ohook.html#How_to_remove_Ohook">Ohook</a>, <a
 href="kms38.html#How_to_remove_KMS38">KMS38</a>, <a
 href="online_kms.html#How_to_remove_Online_KMS">Online KMS</a>.</p></li>
-<li><p><strong>Is MAS safe? How to know if there is any
+<li><p><strong>Is MAS safe? How can I know if there is any
 malware?</strong><br />
 MAS is fully <a href="index.html#MAS_Latest_Release">open source</a>.
 You can open the batch files with notepad and verify it. It has many
 users/stars on Github. You can even perform the activation manually,
-check Doc section for instructions.</p></li>
+check the Docs section for instructions.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>Can I link my Microsoft account safely with MAS
 activation methods?</strong><br />
 Yes.</p></li>
@@ -462,17 +462,17 @@ Check this <a href="bypass-russian-geoblock.html">guide</a>.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>How to change Windows 10/11 Home to Pro?</strong><br />
 Use the change edition option in the Extras section in MAS.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>Can I activate Office 365?</strong><br />
-Yes, use Ohook activation option. However, you can’t get server-side
+Yes, use the Ohook activation option. However, you can’t get server-side
-O365 specific features such as 1TB storage in Onedrive, though almost
+O365 specific features such as 1TB storage in OneDrive, though almost
-all other features and 5GB storage in free onedrive account would work
+all other features and 5GB storage in free OneDrive account would work
 fine.</p></li>
-<li><p><strong>I’m getting ‘Office is not genuine
+<li><p><strong>I’m getting an ‘Office is not genuine’
-banner’.</strong><br />
+banner.</strong><br />
 Run Ohook activation from the latest MAS version.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>Can I delete the MAS folder after
 activation?</strong><br />
 Yes.</p></li>
-<li><p><strong>How MAS is able to activate?</strong><br />
+<li><p><strong>How is MAS able to activate?</strong><br />
 Read activation details in the Docs section.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>Does MAS work for Windows 7/8.1?</strong><br />
 The online KMS option works for Windows 7 Pro &amp; Enterprise (Not

_site/fix-wpa-registry.html

@@ -409,16 +409,16 @@ div.tocify {
 <h1>Fix WPA Registry</h1>
 <hr />
 <ul>
-<li><p>In some cases, system may have corrupt WPA registry keys
+<li><p>In some cases, the system may have corrupt WPA registry keys at
 <code>HKEY_LOCAL_MACHINE\SYSTEM\WPA</code> which can cause
-<code>sppsvc</code> to not work and activation will fail.</p></li>
+<code>sppsvc</code> to not work and activation to fail.</p></li>
 <li><p>The activation scripts in MAS can detect this issue and will
-inform you accordingly when to run this option. We suggest to run this
+inform you accordingly when it is necesarry to run this option. We
-only when script asks you to do it. If you are not sure if you need to
+suggest running this only when the script asks you to do so. If you are
-do it, you can take the help from <a
+not sure whether you need to do it or not, you can get help from <a
 href="troubleshoot.html">here</a>.</p></li>
-<li><p>This registry key is protected by the Kernal and can not be
+<li><p>This registry key is protected by the Kernel and cannot be
-deleted normally. That is why we need to follow some more below steps to
+deleted normally. That is why we need to follow some more steps below to
 clear it.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
@@ -428,23 +428,24 @@ clear it.</p></li>
 <li><p>Download <a
 href="https://github.com/asdcorp/rearm/archive/refs/heads/principalis.zip"
 class="uri">https://github.com/asdcorp/rearm/archive/refs/heads/principalis.zip</a></p></li>
-<li><p>Extract this zip file</p></li>
+<li><p>Extract this zip file.</p></li>
-<li><p>Copy <code>rearm.cmd</code> file to the root of the C drive like
+<li><p>Copy <code>rearm.cmd</code> file to the root of the C drive, like
-<code>C:\rearm.cmd</code></p></li>
+<code>C:\rearm.cmd</code>.</p></li>
-<li><p>Open command prompt as admin and enter the below command<br />
+<li><p>Open the command prompt as administrator and enter the below
+command<br />
 <code>Shutdown /f /r /o /t 0</code></p></li>
-<li><p>After system restart, you will find Troubleshoot &gt; Advanced
+<li><p>After the system restarts, select Troubleshoot &gt; Advanced
-Option, select Command Prompt option</p></li>
+Options &gt; Command Prompt.</p></li>
-<li><p>Now enter the below command<br />
+<li><p>Enter the following command<br />
 <code>C:\rearm.cmd</code></p></li>
-<li><p>If it says the command is not recognized then enter<br />
+<li><p>If it says the command is not recognized, enter<br />
 <code>bcdedit | find "osdevice"</code></p></li>
-<li><p>It will show you the OS drive letter, use that drive letter in
+<li><p>It will show you the OS drive letter. Use that drive letter in
 the command, for example -<br />
 <code>E:\rearm.cmd</code></p></li>
 <li><p>Wait for it to finish. When it’s finished, you will be able to
-type in the command prompt, if not then wait.</p></li>
+type in the command prompt, If not then wait.</p></li>
-<li><p>Once done, exit and then normally boot into windows.</p></li>
+<li><p>Once done, exit and then normally boot into Windows.</p></li>
 <li><p>Let <a href="contactus.html">us know</a> if it doesn’t
 help.</p></li>
 </ul>

_site/genuine-installation-media.html

@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ div.tocify {
 
 <div id="genuine-installation-media" class="section level2">
 <h2>Genuine Installation Media</h2>
-<p>All download links leads to genuine files only.</p>
+<p>All download links lead to genuine files only.</p>
 <table>
 <colgroup>
 <col width="46%" />
@@ -489,26 +489,26 @@ allows customization)</td>
 </tr>
 </tbody>
 </table>
-<p>You can contact <a href="https://discord.gg/gjJEfq7ux8">here</a> if
+<p>You can contact us <a href="https://discord.gg/gjJEfq7ux8">here</a>
-you need any other Windows / Office files.</p>
+if you need any other Windows / Office files.</p>
 <hr />
 </div>
 <div id="verify-authenticity-of-files" class="section level2">
 <h2>Verify Authenticity Of Files</h2>
 <ul>
-<li><p>We can use <a
+<li><p>We can use the <a
 href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File_verification">file hashing
-method</a> to verify if a file is genuine or not but we must first know
+method</a> to verify if a file is genuine or not, but we must first know
 the actual checksum of the file.</p></li>
-<li><p>Microsoft publish a checksum list for <a
+<li><p>Microsoft publishes a checksum list for <a
 href="https://www.microsoft.com/software-download/windows11">Windows
-11</a> consumer edition. Checksum list for other products is not public
+11</a> consumer edition. The checksum list for other products is not
-and it’s available to paid subscribers of <a
+public and is available to paid subscribers of <a
 href="https://visualstudio.microsoft.com/subscriptions/">MVS</a>.</p></li>
 <li><p>There are many places where we can find the checksums for
-Microsoft files and compare them with our files with tools like <a
+Microsoft files and compare them with our files using tools like <a
 href="https://7-zip.org/">7-Zip</a> (After installing 7-Zip, right click
-on ISO file and goto 7-Zip &gt; CRC SHA). Below is a list of sites
+on the ISO file and go to 7-Zip &gt; CRC SHA). Below is a list of sites
 containing checksums.</p>
 <ol style="list-style-type: decimal">
 <li><a href="https://files.rg-adguard.net/">files.rg-adguard</a> (most

_site/hwid.html

@@ -410,26 +410,25 @@ div.tocify {
 <hr />
 <div id="overview" class="section level2">
 <h2>Overview</h2>
-<p><strong>Note: HWID Activation is working again with a new
+<p><strong>Note: HWID Activation is now working again with a new
 method.</strong></p>
 <hr />
 <ul>
 <li><p>How to use it? Please find the instructions <a
 href="index.html#Download__How_to_use_it">here</a>.</p></li>
-<li><p>This activation is supported for Windows 10/11 only.</p></li>
+<li><p>This activation method supports Windows 10/11 only.</p></li>
-<li><p>This activation does not store or modify/patch any files in your
+<li><p>This activation method does not store or modify any files in your
 system.</p></li>
-<li><p>This activation is a permanent activation for your system
+<li><p>This activation method gives you permanent Windows activation for
-Hardware.</p></li>
+your system hardware.</p></li>
-<li><p>On a system, this activation can be created for all the supported
+<li><p>All activations can be linked to a Microsoft account without any
-editions, and all can be linked to Microsoft account without any
 issues.</p></li>
-<li><p>Once a system is activated, this activation cannot be removed
+<li><p>Once the system is activated, this activation cannot be removed
 because the license is stored in the Microsoft servers and not in the
 user’s system. MS checks the hardware ID (HWID) and if a license is
 found in their database, the system will automatically activate. This is
 how official digital license works.</p></li>
-<li><p>Any significant changes in the Hardware (such as a motherboard)
+<li><p>Any significant changes to the hardware (such as a motherboard)
 may deactivate the system. It is possible to reactivate a system that
 was deactivated because of significant hardware changes, IF your
 activation, was linked to an online Microsoft account.</p></li>
@@ -437,17 +436,18 @@ activation, was linked to an online Microsoft account.</p></li>
 If you are trying to activate without these conditions being met, then
 the system will auto-activate later when the conditions are
 met.</p></li>
-<li><p>Auto activation scenario after the Windows re-install:</p>
+<li><p>The following is required for Windows to reactivate itself after
+Windows reinstall:</p>
 <ul>
-<li><p>The Internet is required. (Only at the time of
+<li><p>The internet is required. (Only at the time of
 activation)</p></li>
-<li><p>The system will auto-activate if Retail (Consumer) media was used
+<li><p>The system will auto-activate only if Retail (Consumer) media was
-for the installation.</p></li>
+used for installing Windows.</p></li>
 <li><p>The system will NOT auto-activate if VL (Business) media was used
-for the installation. In this case, the user will have to insert that
+for the installation. In this case, the user will have to insert the
-windows edition Retail/OEM key (find keys below on this page) to
+generic Retail/OEM key corresponding to the Windows edition currently
-activate, if the user doesn’t wish to activate again using this
+running to activate if the user doesn’t want to use the script again.
-script.</p></li>
+(Those keys can be found below on this page)</p></li>
 </ul></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
@@ -461,19 +461,21 @@ script.</p></li>
 class="section level4">
 <h4>HWID 1 (Now defunct) (Summer of 2018 - Sep 26 2023)</h4>
 <ul>
-<li><p>In the official upgrade process from Windows 7 to Windows 10,
+<li><p>In the official upgrade process from Windows 7 to Windows 10, if
-Microsoft provided an HWID (digital license) activation for Windows 10
+your copy of Windows 7 was activated, Microsoft provided a digital
-without any cost.</p></li>
+license for Windows 10 without any cost.</p></li>
 <li><p>In the background, the upgrade process runs a file named
 gatherosstate.exe (available in Windows 10/11 ISO) and it checks the
-license of current Windows if found activated, it generates a valid
+license of the current Windows installation. If it detected that it is
-GenuineTicket.xml <strong>ticket</strong> which is sent to Microsoft and
+activated, it generates a valid GenuineTicket.xml
-in return, MS authorizes a license.</p></li>
+<strong>ticket</strong> which is sent to Microsoft and in return, MS
-<li><p>So if we just convince the gatherosstate.exe file that the
+authorizes a license.</p></li>
+<li><p>So, if we can convince the gatherosstate.exe file that the
 conditions are met for ticket generation by fooling it, it will generate
-a valid ticket, which can be used to get the valid HWID (Digital
+a valid ticket, which can be used to get the valid digital
-license).</p></li>
+license.</p></li>
-<li><p>How to convince the gatherosstate.exe?<br />
+<li><p>How to convince gatherosstate.exe that Windows is
+activated?<br />
 There are two methods for it.<br />
 <br />
 <strong>1-</strong> Place a <a
@@ -481,43 +483,44 @@ href="https://github.com/asdcorp/Integrated_Patcher_3">custom
 slc.dll</a> file beside gatherosstate.exe:<br />
 gatherosstate.exe uses the system's
 <code>C:\Windows\System32\slc.dll</code> file to gather the system's
-info. If we place a custom slc.dll file beside gatherosstate.exe which
+info. If we place a custom slc.dll file beside gatherosstate.exe, it can
-can send the rubbish data to it, then it will simply accept it and
+send rubbish data to it, then it will simply accept it and generate a
-generate a valid ticket.<br />
+valid ticket.<br />
 <br />
 <strong>2-</strong> <a
 href="https://github.com/asdcorp/GamersOsState">Modify</a> the
-gatherosstate.exe file itself so that it doesn't check the system's
+gatherosstate.exe file directly so that it doesn't check the system's
-activation status and can directly create a valid ticket.</p></li>
+activation status at all and create a valid ticket.</p></li>
-<li><p>You can find working of this old method here <a
+<li><p>You can find the workings of this old method here: <a
 href="https://github.com/massgravel/MAS-Legacy-Methods">MAS-Legacy-Methods</a>.</p></li>
 <li><p>Microsoft <a
 href="https://devicepartner.microsoft.com/en-us/communications/comm-windows-ends-installation-path-for-free-windows-7-8-upgrade">made</a>
-server side changes to to block the free upgrade and with that server
+server-side changes to their licensing servers to block the free
-side change, this method stopped working. To be clear, only new
+upgrade, and with that server-side change, this method stopped working.
-activation requests coming from new hardware was blocked, already
+To be clear, only new activation requests coming from new hardware were
-established HWID are fine.</p></li>
+blocked, already established digital licenses with this method are
+fine.</p></li>
 </ul>
 </div>
 <div id="hwid-2-currently-working-03-oct-2023---current"
 class="section level4">
 <h4>HWID 2 (Currently working) (03 Oct 2023 - Current)</h4>
 <ul>
-<li>When Microsoft stopped the free upgrade, it started requiring
+<li>When Microsoft stopped the free upgrade, it started requiring a
-Genuine valid key in ticket to authorize a digital license. In the new
+genuine valid key in the ticket to authorize a digital license. In the
-method we used only the Installation ID of a genuine, valid key. This
+new method, we use only the Installation ID of a genuine, valid key.
-gets accepted by the server and allows us to get a digital license for
+This gets accepted by the server and allows us to get a digital license
-free. Check manual activation process in below section to know how to
+for free. Check the manual activation process in below section to know
-make working universal tickets.</li>
+how to make working universal tickets.</li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
 <p>Now a question, can Microsoft block the new requests or revoke
-already established HWID license?</p>
+already established digital licenses?</p>
 <ul>
-<li>Revoking the license would be too extreme and will face many
+<li>Revoking the licenses would be too extreme and will face many
-complications and risk of voiding valid licenses. However they can block
+complications and create a risk of voiding valid licenses. However, they
-the new activation requests for new hardware coming from the methods
+can very easily block the new activation requests for new hardware
-mentioned here.</li>
+coming from the methods mentioned here.</li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
 </div>
@@ -667,8 +670,8 @@ support activation on non-azure systems.</p></li>
 <div id="how-to-remove-hwid" class="section level2">
 <h2>How to remove HWID?</h2>
 <ul>
-<li>You can not remove it, same as you can not remove official Windows
+<li>You cannot remove it, just like you cannot remove an official
-digital (HWID) license. Once a system is activated, this activation
+Windows digital license. Once a system is activated, this activation
 cannot be removed because the license is stored in the Microsoft servers
 and not in the user’s system. MS checks the hardware ID (HWID) and if a
 license is found in their database, the system will automatically
@@ -686,23 +689,23 @@ activate.</li>
 <div id="manual-activation" class="section level2">
 <h2>Manual Activation</h2>
 <p>This is for those who wants to perform manual activation. If you want
-a tool to do this for you then check <a href="index.html">here</a>.</p>
+a tool to do this for you, then check <a href="index.html">here</a>.</p>
-<p>We can divide the manual activation process into two parts.</p>
+<p>We can perform the manual activation process in 2 ways.</p>
 <div id="from-ready-made-ticket" class="section level3">
 <h3>1- From Ready-Made Ticket</h3>
 <ul>
-<li><p>Make sure the Internet is enabled.</p></li>
+<li><p>Make sure the internet is enabled.</p></li>
-<li><p>Open Windows Powershell as administrator, and enter the following
+<li><p>Open Windows PowerShell as administrator, and enter the following
-listed commands in the sequence in which they are given.</p></li>
+commands in the sequence in which they are given.</p></li>
-<li><p>Enter the Key, (Replace <code>&lt;key&gt;</code> with the key
+<li><p>Enter the Key (Replace <code>&lt;key&gt;</code> with the key from
-from the above list) with the following command</p></li>
+the above list) with the following command:</p></li>
 </ul>
 <p><code>slmgr /ipk &lt;key&gt;</code></p>
 <ul>
 <li><p>Download Universal tickets from <a
 href="https://pixeldrain.com/u/GbVLtMn6">here</a> and extract the
 downloaded file.</p></li>
-<li><p>Now enter below code in Powershell</p></li>
+<li><p>Now enter below code in PowerShell:</p></li>
 </ul>
 <p><code>(Get-ItemProperty HKLM:\SYSTEM\CurrentControlSet\Control\ProductOptions).OSProductPfn</code></p>
 <ul>
@@ -710,17 +713,17 @@ downloaded file.</p></li>
 <code>Microsoft.Windows.48.X19-98841_8wekyb3d8bbwe</code></p></li>
 <li><p>You need to find the exact same name ticket file in the folder
 which you have extracted earlier.</p></li>
-<li><p>Copy that ticket file and paste it in the below folder</p>
+<li><p>Copy that ticket file and paste it in the following folder:</p>
 <p><code>C:\ProgramData\Microsoft\Windows\ClipSVC\GenuineTicket</code></p></li>
-<li><p>Now run below command in Powershell to apply the ticket</p></li>
+<li><p>Now run below command in PowerShell to apply the ticket:</p></li>
 </ul>
 <p><code>clipup -v -o</code></p>
 <ul>
-<li>Activate Windows with the following command</li>
+<li>Activate Windows with the following command:</li>
 </ul>
 <p><code>slmgr /ato</code></p>
 <ul>
-<li>Check Activation Status with the following command</li>
+<li>Check Activation Status with the following command:</li>
 </ul>
 <p><code>slmgr /xpr</code></p>
 <ul>
@@ -730,26 +733,27 @@ which you have extracted earlier.</p></li>
 </div>
 <div id="from-scratch" class="section level3">
 <h3>2- From Scratch</h3>
-<p>In this process we will perform activation from scratch. This is
+<p>In this process, we will perform activation from scratch. This is
-based on Universal ticket method. Here we will create identical tickets
+based on the Universal ticket method. Here, we will create identical
-which are used in MAS HWID script and activate the system with it.</p>
+tickets that are used in the MAS HWID script and activate the system
+with them.</p>
 <ul>
-<li><p>Download file from the below official MS link and extract this
+<li><p>Download the file from the official MS link and extract the .cab
-.cab file.<br />
+file.<br />
 <a
 href="https://download.microsoft.com/download/9/A/E/9AE69DD5-BA93-44E0-864E-180F5E700AB4/adk/Installers/14f4df8a2a7fc82a4f415cf6a341415d.cab"
 class="uri">https://download.microsoft.com/download/9/A/E/9AE69DD5-BA93-44E0-864E-180F5E700AB4/adk/Installers/14f4df8a2a7fc82a4f415cf6a341415d.cab</a></p></li>
 <li><p>Find the file named
-<code>filf8377e82b29deadca67bc4858ed3fba9</code> and rename it as
+<code>filf8377e82b29deadca67bc4858ed3fba9</code> and rename it to
 <code>gatherosstate.exe</code></p></li>
-<li><p>Make a folder named <code>Files</code> in C drive,
+<li><p>Make a folder named <code>Files</code> in the C drive,
 <code>C:\Files</code> and copy the <code>gatherosstate.exe</code> file
-in that folder.</p></li>
+into that folder.</p></li>
-<li><p>Make sure the Internet is enabled.</p></li>
+<li><p>Make sure that the internet is enabled.</p></li>
-<li><p>Open Windows Powershell as administrator, and enter the following
+<li><p>Open Windows PowerShell as administrator and enter the following
-listed commands in the sequence in which they are given.</p></li>
+commands in the sequence in which they are given.</p></li>
-<li><p>Enter the Key, (Replace <code>&lt;key&gt;</code> with the key
+<li><p>Enter the key (Replace <code>&lt;key&gt;</code> with the key from
-from the above list) with the following command</p></li>
+the above list) with the following command:</p></li>
 </ul>
 <p><code>slmgr /ipk &lt;key&gt;</code></p>
 <ul>
@@ -828,11 +832,11 @@ $bytes[34376] = 0xeb
 $bytes[34377] = 0x63
 [System.IO.File]::WriteAllBytes(&quot;C:\Files\gatherosstatemodified.exe&quot;, $bytes)</code></pre>
 <ul>
-<li>Now right click on the file <code>gatherosstatemodified.exe</code>
+<li>Now right click on the file <code>gatherosstatemodified.exe</code>,
-and goto properties and set the compatibility to Windows XP SP3.<br />
+go to properties and set the compatibility mode to Windows XP SP3.<br />
 </li>
 <li>Now we need to generate the ticket, to do that, enter the below
-command.</li>
+command:</li>
 </ul>
 <!-- -->
 <pre><code>$value = (Get-ItemProperty HKLM:\SYSTEM\CurrentControlSet\Control\ProductOptions).OSProductPfn
@@ -840,15 +844,15 @@ command.</li>
 C:\Files\gatherosstatemodified.exe /c Pfn=$value`;PKeyIID=465145217131314304264339481117862266242033457260311819664735280</code></pre>
 <ul>
 <li>A GenuineTicket.xml file should be created in the folder
-<code>C:\Files\</code> now let’s apply it.</li>
+<code>C:\Files\</code>. Now, let’s apply it.</li>
 </ul>
 <p><code>clipup -v -o -altto C:\Files\</code></p>
 <ul>
-<li>Activate Windows with the following command</li>
+<li>Activate Windows with the following command:</li>
 </ul>
 <p><code>slmgr /ato</code></p>
 <ul>
-<li>Check Activation Status with the following command</li>
+<li>Check Activation Status with the following command:</li>
 </ul>
 <p><code>slmgr /xpr</code></p>
 <ul>
@@ -856,12 +860,13 @@ C:\Files\gatherosstatemodified.exe /c Pfn=$value`;PKeyIID=4651452171313143042643
 </ul>
 <p><strong>Notes:</strong></p>
 <ul>
-<li><p>If the system is already activated then created ticket will be a
+<li><p>If the system is already activated then, then the created ticket
-Lockbox ticket and if not then it will be a Downlevel ticket.</p></li>
+will be a Lockbox ticket. If not, it will be a Downlevel
+ticket.</p></li>
 <li><p>To make the exact ticket used in MAS HWID script, make sure
-system is already activated and fix the time with below Powershell
+system is already activated and fix the time with the below PowerShell
-command and then initiate the ticket generation process as per above
+command and then initiate the ticket generation process as per the steps
-mentioned steps.<br />
+mentioned above.<br />
 <code>Set-TimeZone -Id "UTC"; $date=[datetime]"2022/10/11 12:00";while($true){set-date $date; start-sleep -milliseconds 10}</code></p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />

_site/idm-activation-script.html

@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ div.tocify {
 
 <div id="idm-activation-script" class="section level2">
 <h2>IDM Activation Script</h2>
-<p>An open source tool to activate and reset trial of <a
+<p>An open source tool to activate or reset trial of <a
 href="https://www.internetdownloadmanager.com/">Internet Download
 Manager</a></p>
 <hr />
@@ -433,11 +433,11 @@ href="https://github.com/WindowsAddict/IDM-Activation-Script">GitHub</a></p>
 <div id="download-how-to-use-it" class="section level2">
 <h2>Download / How to use it?</h2>
 <ul>
-<li>First fresh install <a
+<li>First, fresh install <a
 href="https://www.internetdownloadmanager.com/">Internet Download
 Manager</a>. Make sure previous cracks/patches are removed/uninstalled
 if there are any.</li>
-<li>After that follow below steps to activate it.</li>
+<li>After that, follow below steps to activate it.</li>
 </ul>
 <div id="method-1---powershell" class="section level3">
 <h3>Method 1 - PowerShell</h3>
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ if there are any.</li>
 select PowerShell or Terminal (Not CMD).</li>
 <li>Copy-paste the below code and press enter<br />
 <code>irm https://massgrave.dev/ias | iex</code></li>
-<li>You will see the activation options, and follow onscreen
+<li>You will see the activation options, follow the on-screen
 instructions.</li>
 <li>That’s all.</li>
 </ul>
@@ -477,8 +477,8 @@ download manager (IDM).</li>
 <li>This method requires Internet at the time of activation.</li>
 <li>IDM updates can be installed directly without having to activate
 again.</li>
-<li>After the activation, if in some case, the IDM starts to show
+<li>After the activation, if in some case, IDM starts to show activation
-activation nag screen, then just run the activation option again.</li>
+nag screen, then just run the activation option again.</li>
 </ul>
 </div>
 <div id="reset-idm-activation-trial" class="section level4">
@@ -487,7 +487,7 @@ activation nag screen, then just run the activation option again.</li>
 <li>Internet download manager provides 30 days trial period, you can use
 this script to reset this Activation / Trial period whenever you
 want.</li>
-<li>This option also can be used to restore status if in case the IDM
+<li>This option also can be used to restore status if in case IDM
 reports fake serial key and other similar errors.</li>
 </ul>
 </div>
@@ -496,15 +496,15 @@ reports fake serial key and other similar errors.</li>
 <ul>
 <li>Project is supported for Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server
 equivalent.</li>
-<li>Powershell method to run IAS is supported on Windows 8 and
+<li>PowerShell method to run IAS is supported on Windows 8 and
 higher.</li>
 </ul>
 </div>
 <div id="advanced-info" class="section level4">
 <h4>Advanced Info</h4>
 <ul>
-<li>To add a custom name in IDM license info, edit the line number 21 in
+<li>To add a custom name in IDM license info, edit line number 21 in the
-the script file.</li>
+script file.</li>
 <li>For activation in unattended mode, run the script with
 <code>/act</code> parameter.</li>
 <li>For reset in unattended mode, run the script with <code>/res</code>
@@ -524,7 +524,7 @@ from tampering and data is stored in a pattern to track the fake serial
 issue and the remaining trial days. To activate it, script here simply
 generate those registry keys by triggering a few downloads in IDM and
 identifies those registry keys and locks them so IDM can’t edit and
-view. That way IDM can not show the warning that it’s activated with a
+view. That way IDM cannot show the warning that it’s activated with a
 fake serial key.</li>
 </ul>
 <hr />

_site/index.html

@@ -422,13 +422,13 @@ Activate Windows</li>
 <li><strong>KMS38</strong> Method to Activate Windows/Server Till the
 Year 2038</li>
 <li><strong>Online KMS</strong> Method to Activate Windows/Server/Office
-Till 180 Days (Lifetime With Renewal Task)</li>
+For 180 Days (Lifetime With Renewal Task)</li>
-<li>Advanced Activation Troubleshoot</li>
+<li>Advanced Activation Troubleshooting</li>
 <li>$OEM$ Folders For Preactivation</li>
 <li>Change Windows Edition</li>
 <li>Check Windows/Office Activation Status</li>
-<li>Available in All In One and Separate Files Version</li>
+<li>Available in All In One and Separate Files Versions</li>
-<li>Fully Open Source and Based on Batch Script</li>
+<li>Fully Open Source and Based on Batch Scripts</li>
 <li>Fewer Antivirus Detections</li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
@@ -452,9 +452,9 @@ method.</strong></p>
 <ul>
 <li>On Windows 8.1/10/11, right-click on the Windows start menu and
 select PowerShell or Terminal (Not CMD).</li>
-<li>Copy-paste the below code and press enter<br />
+<li>Copy and paste the code below and press enter<br />
 <code>irm https://massgrave.dev/get | iex</code></li>
-<li>You will see the activation options, and follow onscreen
+<li>You will see the activation options. Follow the on-screen
 instructions.</li>
 <li>That’s all.</li>
 </ul>
@@ -468,7 +468,7 @@ href="https://github.com/massgravel/Microsoft-Activation-Scripts/archive/refs/he
 <li>In the extracted folder, find the folder named
 <code>All-In-One-Version</code></li>
 <li>Run the file named <code>MAS_AIO.cmd</code></li>
-<li>You will see the activation options, and follow onscreen
+<li>You will see the activation options, follow the on-screen
 instructions.</li>
 <li>That’s all.</li>
 </ul>

_site/kms38.html

@@ -414,11 +414,11 @@ div.tocify {
 <li><p>How to use it? Please find the instructions <a
 href="index.html#Download__How_to_use_it">here</a>.</p></li>
 <li><p>This activation method activates Windows 10/11 and Windows Server
-(14393 and later builds), until 19 January 2038 03:14:07 UTC.</p></li>
+(14393 and later builds), until January 19, 2038, 03:14:07 UTC.</p></li>
 <li><p>This activation method does not store any files on the
 system.</p></li>
 <li><p>This activation method works offline.</p></li>
-<li><p>Unlike HWID and Online KMS activation option, KMS38 does not
+<li><p>Unlike HWID and Online KMS activation options, KMS38 does not
 match with any official activation method.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
@@ -432,18 +432,18 @@ activation environment, activation lasts a maximum of up to 180 days.
 This is done using a valid license and server setup.</p></li>
 <li><p>In the Windows major upgrade process, the system uses
 <code>gatherosstate.exe</code> to carry over the remaining KMS
-activation period. It does it by creating a ticket that can be used
+activation period. It does this by creating a ticket that can be used
 offline.</p></li>
 <li><p>The trick is that we can fool the <code>gatherosstate.exe</code>
 about the remaining KMS activation period and manually put the desired
-period maximum up to 19 January 2038 03:14:07 UTC.</p></li>
+period maximum up to January 19, 2038, 03:14:07 UTC.</p></li>
-<li><p>Why it’s limited to the year 2038?<br />
+<li><p>Why is it limited to the year 2038?<br />
 It’s related to the <a
 href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Year_2038_problem">Y2K38 problem</a>
 as this date (19 January 2038 03:14:07 UTC) is the maximum date we can
 give to <code>gatherosstate.exe</code> without it looping back to the
 year 1970.</p></li>
-<li><p>How to convince the gatherosstate.exe?<br />
+<li><p>How can we convince the gatherosstate.exe?<br />
 There are two methods for it.<br />
 <br />
 <strong>1-</strong> Place a <a
@@ -453,7 +453,7 @@ gatherosstate.exe uses the system’s
 <code>C:\Windows\System32\slc.dll</code> file to gather the system’s
 info. If we place a custom slc.dll file beside gatherosstate.exe which
 can send the rubbish data to it, then it will simply accept it and
-generate a valid ticket allowing activation upto 19 January 2038
+generate a valid ticket allowing activation up to January 19, 2038,
 03:14:07 UTC.<br />
 <br />
 <strong>2-</strong> <a
@@ -465,11 +465,12 @@ wish.</p></li>
 <ul>
 <li>To be clear, we are <strong>not modifying/patching any on-board
 system file</strong> to get the ticket. Gatherosstate.exe is a part of
-ISO file and not available in C drive system files. System’s slc.dll
+the ISO file and not available in C drive system files. The system’s
-file is not touched, instead we use custom slc.dll only for a brief
+slc.dll file is not touched; Instead, we use custom slc.dll only for a
-moment of ticket generation.</li>
+brief moment of ticket generation.</li>
-<li>Latest MAS doesn’t use any of these methods, instead it uses ready
+<li>Latest MAS doesn’t use any of these methods; Instead, it uses
-to use Universal tickets (check below for manual activation info).</li>
+ready-to-use Universal tickets (check below for manual activation
+info).</li>
 </ul></li>
 </ul>
 <p><strong>Q:</strong> Can Microsoft block this kind of
@@ -742,10 +743,10 @@ support activation on non-azure systems.</p></li>
 <div id="how-to-remove-kms38" class="section level2">
 <h2>How to remove KMS38?</h2>
 <ul>
-<li><p>In MAS, goto KMS38 Activation and apply Remove KM38 Protection
+<li><p>In MAS, go to KMS38 Activation and apply the Remove KM38
-option.</p></li>
+Protection option.</p></li>
-<li><p>After that, In MAS, goto Troubleshoot and apply Fix Licensing
+<li><p>After that, In MAS, go to Troubleshoot and apply the Fix
-option.</p></li>
+Licensing option.</p></li>
 <li><p>Done.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
@@ -753,9 +754,9 @@ option.</p></li>
 <div id="kms38---server-coracor" class="section level2">
 <h2>KMS38 - Server Cor/Acor</h2>
 <ul>
-<li><p>Windows Server Cor/Acor (No GUI) editions don’t have
+<li><p>Windows Server Cor/Acor (No GUI) editions don’t have the
 <code>clipup.exe</code> file.</p></li>
-<li><p>To KMS38 activate it, you need to download
+<li><p>To KMS38 activate it, you need to download the
 <code>ClipUp.exe</code> file from <a
 href="https://www.box.com/index.php?rm=box_download_shared_file&amp;shared_name=qrmkewit9ty6ah0qzk0vncyyrwo8hei9&amp;file_id=f_747809716860">this
 link</a>.<br />
@@ -763,15 +764,15 @@ link</a>.<br />
 <code>File: ClipUp.exe</code><br />
 <code>SHA-256: 0d6e9f6bbd0321eda149658d96040cb4f79e0bd93ba60061f25b28fecbf4d4ef</code><br />
 <br />
-This file has digital signatures which can be verified. You can also get
+This file has digital signatures that can be verified. You can also get
-this file from official <a
+this file from the official <a
 href="https://download.microsoft.com/download/1/6/F/16FA20E6-4662-482A-920B-1A45CF5AAE3C/14393.0.160715-1616.RS1_RELEASE_SERVER_EVAL_X64FRE_EN-US.ISO">Windows
 Server 2016 x64 RTM ISO</a>.</p></li>
-<li><p>Put the <code>ClipUp.exe</code> beside the KMS38 Activation
+<li><p>Put the <code>ClipUp.exe</code> file beside the KMS38 Activation
 script. That would be either <code>MAS_AIO.cmd</code> or
 <code>KMS38_Activation.cmd</code></p></li>
-<li><p>Activation script will check <code>ClipUp.exe</code> in the
+<li><p>The activation script will check for <code>ClipUp.exe</code> in
-current folder (from where script is running) and will use it
+the current folder (from where the script is running) and will use it
 accordingly.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
@@ -781,7 +782,7 @@ accordingly.</p></li>
 <ul>
 <li><p>KMS38 Activation is vulnerable to unintended replacement by a
 180-Day KMS Activator.</p></li>
-<li><p>From MAS 1.7, script will enable the KMS38 protection by
+<li><p>From MAS 1.7, the script will enable KMS38 protection by
 default.</p></li>
 <li><p>If you are going to use <a
 href="(https://github.com/abbodi1406/KMS_VL_ALL_AIO)">KMS_VL_ALL</a> by
@@ -791,13 +792,14 @@ protection.</p></li>
 <li><p>Below is the explanation for how the script protect
 KMS38.</p></li>
 <li><p>In the KMS activation method, Windows first checks the KMS IP
-registered as a specific KMS, and if that is not defined then it checks
+registered as a specific KMS, and if that is not defined, then it checks
 the Global KMS IP. Another fact is that if Localhost (IP range
-127.0.0.0/8) is defined as KMS IP in Windows 8 and later OS then Windows
+127.0.0.0/8) is defined as the KMS IP in Windows 8 and later OS, then
-will not accept it as a valid KMS IP. This script simply utilizes the
+Windows will not accept it as a valid KMS IP. This script simply
-above facts to protect the KMS38 activation from being overwritten by
+utilizes the above facts to protect the KMS38 activation from being
-any alternative ‘normal’ 180-Day KMS Activation and at the same time
+overwritten by any alternative ‘normal’ 180-Day KMS Activation, and at
-that KMS activator can be used for Office activation.</p></li>
+the same time, that KMS activator can be used for Office
+activation.</p></li>
 <li><p>Script steps-</p>
 <ul>
 <li><p>Set the Windows edition-specific KMS IP to Localhost
@@ -818,31 +820,32 @@ that KMS activator can be used for Office activation.</p></li>
 </div>
 <div id="manual-activation" class="section level2">
 <h2>Manual Activation</h2>
-<p>This is for those who wants to perform manual activation. If you want
+<p>This is for those who want to perform manual activation. If you want
-a tool to do this for you then check <a href="index.html">here</a>.</p>
+a tool to do this for you, then check <a href="index.html">here</a>.</p>
-<p>We can divide the manual activation process into two parts.</p>
+<p>We can perform the manual activation process in 2 ways.</p>
 <div id="from-ready-made-ticket" class="section level3">
 <h3>1- From Ready-Made Ticket</h3>
 <ul>
-<li><p>Open Windows Powershell as administrator, and enter the following
+<li><p>Open Windows PowerShell as administrator, and enter the following
-listed commands in the sequence in which they are given.</p></li>
+commands in the sequence in which they are given.</p></li>
-<li><p>Enter the Key, (Replace <code>&lt;key&gt;</code> with the key
+<li><p>Enter the key (Replace <code>&lt;key&gt;</code> with the key from
-from the above list) with the following command</p></li>
+the above list) with the following command:</p></li>
 </ul>
 <p><code>slmgr /ipk &lt;key&gt;</code></p>
 <ul>
-<li><p>Download Universal ticket from <a
+<li><p>Download the Universal ticket from <a
 href="https://www.box.com/index.php?rm=box_download_shared_file&amp;shared_name=p9zvmu4tnogv4nkn01kpyvkndfzhhiv4&amp;file_id=f_1171245497490">here</a>
 and extract the downloaded file.</p></li>
 <li><p>Find a file named <code>KMS.xml</code> in the extracted
 folder.</p></li>
-<li><p>Copy that ticket file and paste it in the below folder</p>
+<li><p>Copy that ticket file and paste it in the following folder:</p>
 <p><code>C:\ProgramData\Microsoft\Windows\ClipSVC\GenuineTicket</code></p></li>
-<li><p>Now run below command in Powershell to apply the ticket</p></li>
+<li><p>Now run the below command in PowerShell to apply the
+ticket:</p></li>
 </ul>
 <p><code>clipup -v -o</code></p>
 <ul>
-<li>Check Activation Status with the following command</li>
+<li>Check the Activation Status with the following command:</li>
 </ul>
 <p><code>slmgr /xpr</code></p>
 <ul>
@@ -852,12 +855,13 @@ folder.</p></li>
 </div>
 <div id="from-scratch" class="section level3">
 <h3>2- From Scratch</h3>
-<p>In this process we will perform activation from scratch. This is
+<p>In this process, we will perform activation from scratch. This is
-based on Universal ticket method. Here we will create identical ticket
+based on the Universal ticket method. Here, we will create identical
-which is used in MAS KMS38 script and activate the system with it.</p>
+tickets that are used in the MAS HWID script and activate the system
+with them.</p>
 <ul>
-<li><p>Download file from the below official MS link and extract this
+<li><p>Download the file from the official MS link and extract this .cab
-.cab file.<br />
+file.<br />
 <a
 href="https://download.microsoft.com/download/9/A/E/9AE69DD5-BA93-44E0-864E-180F5E700AB4/adk/Installers/14f4df8a2a7fc82a4f415cf6a341415d.cab"
 class="uri">https://download.microsoft.com/download/9/A/E/9AE69DD5-BA93-44E0-864E-180F5E700AB4/adk/Installers/14f4df8a2a7fc82a4f415cf6a341415d.cab</a></p></li>
@@ -867,10 +871,10 @@ class="uri">https://download.microsoft.com/download/9/A/E/9AE69DD5-BA93-44E0-864
 <li><p>Make a folder named <code>Files</code> in C drive,
 <code>C:\Files</code> and copy the <code>gatherosstate.exe</code> file
 in that folder.</p></li>
-<li><p>Open Windows Powershell as administrator, and enter the following
+<li><p>Open Windows PowerShell as administrator and enter the following
-listed commands in the sequence in which they are given.</p></li>
+commands in the sequence in which they are given.</p></li>
-<li><p>Enter the Key, (Replace <code>&lt;key&gt;</code> with the key
+<li><p>Enter the key (Replace <code>&lt;key&gt;</code> with the key from
-from the above list) with the following command</p></li>
+the above list) with the following command:</p></li>
 </ul>
 <p><code>slmgr /ipk &lt;key&gt;</code></p>
 <ul>
@@ -949,17 +953,17 @@ $bytes[34376] = 0xeb
 $bytes[34377] = 0x63
 [System.IO.File]::WriteAllBytes(&quot;C:\Files\gatherosstatemodified.exe&quot;, $bytes)</code></pre>
 <ul>
-<li>Now right click on the file <code>gatherosstatemodified.exe</code>
+<li>Now right click on the file <code>gatherosstatemodified.exe</code>,
-and goto properties and set the compatibility to Windows XP SP3.<br />
+go to properties and set the compatibility mode to Windows XP SP3.<br />
 </li>
 <li>Now we need to generate the ticket, to do that, enter the below
-command.</li>
+command:</li>
 </ul>
 <!-- -->
 <pre><code>C:\Files\gatherosstatemodified.exe /c GVLKExp=2038-01-19T03:14:07Z`;DownlevelGenuineState=1</code></pre>
 <ul>
 <li>A GenuineTicket.xml file should be created in the folder
-<code>C:\Files\</code> now let’s apply it.</li>
+<code>C:\Files\</code>. Now, let’s apply it:</li>
 </ul>
 <p><code>clipup -v -o -altto C:\Files\</code></p>
 <ul>
@@ -972,27 +976,27 @@ command.</li>
 <p><strong>Notes:</strong></p>
 <ul>
 <li><p>To make the exact ticket used in MAS KMS38 script, fix the time
-with below Powershell command and then initiate the ticket generation
+with the below PowerShell command and then initiate the ticket
-process as per above mentioned steps.<br />
+generation process as per the steps mentioned above.<br />
 <code>Set-TimeZone -Id "UTC"; $date=[datetime]"2022/10/11 12:00";while($true){set-date $date; start-sleep -milliseconds 10}</code></p></li>
 <li><p>In the case of Windows Server Cor/Acor (No GUI) editions, the
-system doesn’t have <code>clipup.exe</code> file.<br />
+system doesn’t have the <code>clipup.exe</code> file.<br />
-To KMS38 activate it, you need to download <code>ClipUp.exe</code> file
+To KMS38 activate it, you need to download the missing
-from <a
+<code>ClipUp.exe</code> file from <a
 href="https://www.box.com/index.php?rm=box_download_shared_file&amp;shared_name=qrmkewit9ty6ah0qzk0vncyyrwo8hei9&amp;file_id=f_747809716860">this
 link</a>.<br />
 <br />
 <code>File: ClipUp.exe</code><br />
 <code>SHA-256: 0d6e9f6bbd0321eda149658d96040cb4f79e0bd93ba60061f25b28fecbf4d4ef</code><br />
 <br />
-This file has digital signatures which can be verified. You can also get
+This file has digital signatures that can be verified. You can also get
-this file from official <a
+this file from the official <a
 href="https://download.microsoft.com/download/1/6/F/16FA20E6-4662-482A-920B-1A45CF5AAE3C/14393.0.160715-1616.RS1_RELEASE_SERVER_EVAL_X64FRE_EN-US.ISO">Windows
 Server 2016 x64 RTM ISO</a>.<br />
 <br />
-Put the <code>ClipUp.exe</code> in <code>C:\Windows\System32</code>
+Put the <code>ClipUp.exe</code> in the <code>C:\Windows\System32</code>
-folder and then initiate the above mentioned activation process. Once
+folder and then initiate the above-mentioned activation process. Once
-the activation is done, you can remove the file.</p></li>
+the activation is complete, you can remove the file.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
 </div>

_site/licensing-servers-issue.html

@@ -410,33 +410,33 @@ div.tocify {
 <hr />
 <ul>
 <li><p>In some cases, <strong>HWID activation</strong> may fail because
-system couldn’t connect to HWID licensing servers.</p></li>
+the system couldn’t connect to HWID licensing servers.</p></li>
-<li><p>Activation script will inform you about this if that is the case.
+<li><p>The activation script will inform you about this if that is the
-We suggest to follow the below guide only when the script tells you to
+case. We suggest to following the below guide only when the script tells
-do it. If you are unsure, you can take the help from <a
+you to do so. If you are unsure, you can get help from <a
 href="troubleshoot.html">here</a>.</p></li>
-<li><p>This may happen mostly either due to DNS or Issues in MS
+<li><p>This may happen mostly due to DNS issues, issues in MS licensing
-licensing servers itself or Firewall rules in the system. Below you can
+servers themselves or firewall rules in the system. Below you can find
-find fixes for it.</p></li>
+fixes for it.</p></li>
-<li><p><strong>Which method to choose for the fix?<br />
+<li><p><strong>Which method should you choose for the fix?<br />
 <br />
-</strong>If you are located in China then choose <strong>Modify Host
+</strong>If you are located in China, then choose the <strong>Modify
-File</strong> option.<br />
+Host File</strong> option.<br />
-If you are not in China then first try <strong>Network Reset</strong>
+If you are not in China, then first try the <strong>Network
-option and if that doesn’t work then <strong>Fix DNS</strong> option,
+Reset</strong> option. If that doesn’t work, try the <strong>Fix
-and if that doesn’t work then try <strong>VPN</strong> method or try
+DNS</strong> option. If that doesn’t work, then try the
-another Internet connection.</p></li>
+<strong>VPN</strong> method or try another internet connection.</p></li>
-<li><p>If you are still facing issues then check <a
+<li><p>If you are still facing issues, check <a
 href="troubleshoot.html">here</a>.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
 <div id="network-reset" class="section level2">
 <h2>Network Reset</h2>
 <ul>
-<li><p>In Windows 10/11, goto settings and search for Network Reset and
+<li><p>In Windows 10/11, go to settings and search for Network Reset,
-apply this option.</p></li>
+then apply this option.</p></li>
 <li><p>Restart your system and try HWID Activation.</p></li>
-<li><p>If it’s showing same Internet error then apply the Fix DNS
+<li><p>If it’s showing the same Internet error then apply the Fix DNS
 option.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
@@ -446,11 +446,11 @@ option.</p></li>
 <ul>
 <li><p>Download the <code>Fix_DNS.zip</code> file from <a
 href="https://www.box.com/index.php?rm=box_download_shared_file&amp;shared_name=4c66hw8ezuijy5j0trwczy860sf825i7&amp;file_id=f_1146300205040">here</a>.</p></li>
-<li><p>Extract the zip file and right click on <code>Fix_DNS.cmd</code>
+<li><p>Extract the zip file and right-click on <code>Fix_DNS.cmd</code>
-file and run it as admin.</p></li>
+file and run it as administrator.</p></li>
-<li><p>Follow onscreen instructions.</p></li>
+<li><p>Follow the on-screen instructions.</p></li>
 <li><p>Once done, try HWID Activation.</p></li>
-<li><p>If it’s showing same Internet error then try VPN option.</p></li>
+<li><p>If it shows the same internet error, try the VPN option.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
 </div>
@@ -461,24 +461,24 @@ file and run it as admin.</p></li>
 <a
 href="https://download.sp.f-secure.com/freedome/installer/2/Freedome.exe"
 class="uri">https://download.sp.f-secure.com/freedome/installer/2/Freedome.exe</a></p></li>
-<li><p>Once done connect to USA servers and then try HWID
+<li><p>Once done, connect to USA servers and then try HWID
 Activation.</p></li>
-<li><p>If it’s showing same Internet error then check <a
+<li><p>If it’s showing the same internet error, check <a
 href="troubleshoot.html">here</a>.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
 </div>
 <div id="modify-host-file" class="section level2">
 <h2>Modify Host File</h2>
-<p>Around 8 Feb 2023 in China, MS licensing servers failed to properly
+<p>Around February 8, 2023, in China, MS licensing servers failed to
-connect and it disrupted many Windows services including activation.
+properly connect, disrupting many Windows services, including
-Solution to this issue is to simply hardcode another country’s MS
+activation. The solution to this issue is to simply hardcode another
-licensing servers IP in hosts file and Windows will use that for
+country’s MS licensing servers IP in hosts file, and Windows will use
-activation. This method can also be used if for any reason DNS is
+that for activation. This method can also be used if, for any reason,
-failing to resolve MS licensing servers.</p>
+DNS is failing to resolve MS licensing servers.</p>
 <ul>
-<li><p>Open Powershell or Terminal as admin (don’t open CMD).</p></li>
+<li><p>Open PowerShell or Terminal as admin (don’t open CMD).</p></li>
-<li><p>Copy paste below lines and press enter,</p></li>
+<li><p>Copy and paste the lines below and press enter:</p></li>
 </ul>
 <!-- -->
 <pre><code>$filePath = &quot;C:\Windows\System32\drivers\etc\hosts&quot;
@@ -489,7 +489,7 @@ Add-Content -Path $filePath -Value &quot;124.108.22.138 licensing.mp.microsoft.c
 <ul>
 <li>Done. Now try HWID Activation.</li>
 </ul>
-<p>To restore it, run below commands.</p>
+<p>To restore it, run the commands below.</p>
 <pre><code>$filePath = &quot;C:\Windows\System32\drivers\etc\hosts&quot;
 
 Set-Content -Path $filePath -Value (Get-Content $filePath | ForEach-Object { $_ -replace &quot;124.108.22.138 licensing.mp.microsoft.com&quot;, &quot;&quot; })</code></pre>

_site/oem-folder.html

@@ -413,19 +413,19 @@ div.tocify {
 <h2>Overview</h2>
 <ul>
 <li><p>To create a pre-activated Windows installation .iso, do the
-following things:</p></li>
+following:</p></li>
-<li><p>Extract <code>$OEM$</code> folder to the desktop using the MAS
+<li><p>Extract the <code>$OEM$</code> folder to the desktop using the
-script.</p></li>
+MAS script.</p></li>
 <li><p>Copy the <code>$OEM$</code> folder to the <code>sources</code>
 folder in the Windows installation media (.iso or USB).</p></li>
 <li><p>The directory will appear like this: <code>\sources\$OEM$</code>
 in your altered .iso or on your bootable USB drive.</p></li>
-<li><p>Now use this .iso or bootable USB drive to install Windows and it
+<li><p>Now use this .iso or bootable USB drive to install Windows, it
 will either already be activated (KMS38) as soon as it boots or will
 self-activate (HWID or Online KMS) at the first internet
 contact.</p></li>
-<li><p>You can check <a href="index.html">here</a> about activation
+<li><p>You can check <a href="index.html">here</a> for activation method
-method details and select the activation method as per your
+details and select the activation method as per your
 requirement.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
@@ -434,15 +434,15 @@ requirement.</p></li>
 <h2>Edit ISO File</h2>
 <ul>
 <li><p>As stated above, you can copy the <code>$OEM$</code> folder to
-your bootable USB so you don’t have to edit the ISO file, however if you
+your bootable USB so you don’t have to edit the ISO file. However, if
-need to then follow below steps.</p></li>
+you need to, then follow the steps below.</p></li>
 <li><p>Extract the ISO file with an archive software like 7-zip or
 Winrar.</p></li>
 <li><p>Add the mentioned folder to the specified location.</p></li>
 <li><p>Run <a
 href="https://forums.mydigitallife.net/posts/1733596">MakeISO.reg</a> by
 Aveyo. <a href="https://pixeldrain.com/u/sKEdjFJA">Mirror</a>.</p></li>
-<li><p>Right click on extracted ISO folder and select
+<li><p>Right-click on the extracted ISO folder and select
 <code>MakeISO</code> option.</p></li>
 <li><p>That’s it.</p></li>
 </ul>
@@ -455,19 +455,19 @@ Aveyo. <a href="https://pixeldrain.com/u/sKEdjFJA">Mirror</a>.</p></li>
 disabled</strong> if the default installed key for the edition is OEM
 Channel.<br />
 For example - Preactivation won’t work for Windows 10 Iot Enterprise
-LTSC because installed key is of OEM channel.</p></li>
+LTSC because installed key is of the OEM channel.</p></li>
 <li><p>The <strong>solution</strong> for this issue is to use (Non-Iot)
-Windows 10 Enterprise LTSC ISO and HWID method in preactivation will use
+Windows 10 Enterprise LTSC ISO, and the HWID method in preactivation
-Iot LTSC key to change the edition.</p></li>
+will use Iot LTSC key to change the edition.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
 </div>
 <div id="kms38---server-coracor" class="section level2">
 <h2>KMS38 - Server Cor/Acor</h2>
 <ul>
-<li><p>Windows Server Cor/Acor (No GUI) editions don’t have
+<li><p>Windows Server Cor/Acor (No GUI) editions don’t have the
 <code>clipup.exe</code> file.</p></li>
-<li><p>To KMS38 activate it, you need to download
+<li><p>To KMS38 activate it, you need to download the missing
 <code>ClipUp.exe</code> file from <a
 href="https://www.box.com/index.php?rm=box_download_shared_file&amp;shared_name=qrmkewit9ty6ah0qzk0vncyyrwo8hei9&amp;file_id=f_747809716860">this
 link</a>.<br />
@@ -475,8 +475,8 @@ link</a>.<br />
 <code>File: ClipUp.exe</code><br />
 <code>SHA-256: 0d6e9f6bbd0321eda149658d96040cb4f79e0bd93ba60061f25b28fecbf4d4ef</code><br />
 <br />
-This file has digital signatures which can be verified. You can also get
+This file has digital signatures that can be verified. You can also get
-this file from official <a
+this file from the official <a
 href="https://download.microsoft.com/download/1/6/F/16FA20E6-4662-482A-920B-1A45CF5AAE3C/14393.0.160715-1616.RS1_RELEASE_SERVER_EVAL_X64FRE_EN-US.ISO">Windows
 Server 2016 x64 RTM ISO</a>.</p></li>
 <li><p>Put the <code>ClipUp.exe</code> beside the KMS38 Activation

_site/office-license-is-not-genuine.html

@@ -417,19 +417,19 @@ activate Office.</p>
 <h2>Reasons</h2>
 <ul>
 <li><p>Office Click-to-Run builds (since February 2021) that are
-activated with KMS check the existence of the KMS server name in the
+activated with KMS check the existence of a KMS server name in the
 registry. If the KMS server is not present, a banner is shown in Office
 programs notifying that “Office isn’t licensed properly”</p></li>
-<li><p>In the case of 32-bit Office installed on 64-bit Windows, Office
+<li><p>If 32-bit Office is installed on 64-bit Windows, Office checks
-checks the KMS server existence in the corresponding WOW6432Node
+the KMS server existence in the corresponding WOW6432Node registry key
-registry key as well.</p></li>
+as well.</p></li>
 <li><p>Apart from this, they also detect if a registered KMS server is
 on their blacklist or not. As far as I know, the below 3 addresses are
 blacklisted.</p>
 <p><code>km-s8.MSG-uides.com</code> <code>km-s9.MSG-uides.com</code>
 <code>0.0.0.0</code>(Remove hyphen)<br />
-The first two are public KMS servers and the last one in simple words is
+The first two are public KMS servers and the last one is not a real
-neither public nor private IP.</p></li>
+IP.</p></li>
 <li><p>Please note that these checks are not performed by Office if the
 proper installation of the Volume version of Office is done with
 Perpetual2019 / 2021 VL channel.</p></li>
@@ -438,7 +438,7 @@ Perpetual2019 / 2021 VL channel.</p></li>
 </div>
 <div id="solutions" class="section level2">
 <h2>Solutions:</h2>
-<p>Please find below various ways you can avoid this banner. The
+<p>Below, you can find various ways of avoiding this banner. The
 simplest option for you is to just use an Office activation tool
 mentioned here.</p>
 <hr />
@@ -463,8 +463,8 @@ hostname.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>If using private KMS server IP:<br />
 </strong>Make sure to use a valid private IP address.</p></li>
 </ul>
-<p>Please find below how to set the KMS server address in the registry.
+<p>Below, you can find how to set the KMS server address in the
-For example with a private IP <code>10.0.0.10</code></p>
+registry. For example, with a private IP <code>10.0.0.10</code></p>
 <pre><code>reg delete &quot;HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\0ff1ce15-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663&quot; /f
 
 reg delete &quot;HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\0ff1ce15-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663&quot; /f /reg:32
@@ -476,11 +476,11 @@ reg add &quot;HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtecti
 </div>
 <div id="install-vl-office" class="section level3">
 <h3>3- Install VL Office</h3>
-<p>As mentioned in the reasons section, these checks are performed only
+<p>As mentioned in the Reasons section, these checks are performed only
-if Retail Office is installed and later converted to VL. The office
+if Retail Office is installed and was later converted to VL. The office
-doesn’t perform any such checks if the proper installation of the VL
+doesn’t perform any kind of related checks if the proper installation of
-office is done.</p>
+the VL office is done.</p>
-<p>Please the guide <a href="office_c2r_custom.html">here</a> for VL
+<p>Please see the guide <a href="office_c2r_custom.html">here</a> for VL
 Office installation.</p>
 <hr />
 </div>
@@ -492,9 +492,9 @@ Office installation.</p>
 non-genuine banners won’t appear by default.</p></li>
 <li><p>Before doing this, make sure your Office update channel is either
 Insider or Current.</p></li>
-<li><p>Make sure the Internet is connected</p></li>
+<li><p>Make sure the internet is connected.</p></li>
-<li><p>Open command prompt as admin and enter below lines and press
+<li><p>Open command prompt as admin, enter the below commands and press
-enter,</p></li>
+enter:</p></li>
 </ul>
 <!-- -->
 <pre><code>reg add HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Office\ClickToRun\Configuration /v CDNBaseUrl /t REG_SZ /d &quot;http://officecdn.microsoft.com/pr/55336B82-A18D-4DD6-B5F6-9E5095C314A6&quot; /f
@@ -511,7 +511,8 @@ reg delete HKLM\SOFTWARE\Policies\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\OfficeUpdate\ /f
 <ul>
 <li><p>It will change the update channel to Production::MEC |
 MonthlyEnterprise</p></li>
-<li><p>Make sure Office starts updating with the last command.</p></li>
+<li><p>Make sure that Office starts updating with the last
+command.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
 </div>

_site/office_c2r_custom.html

@@ -415,11 +415,11 @@ div.tocify {
 for you is to use <a href="office_c2r_links.html">Office C2R
 Installer</a>.</p></li>
 <li><p>Retail Office (e.g. O365) has latest feature updates and Volume
-Office (e.g. ProPlus 2021) don’t have latest feature updates. Both can
+Office (e.g. ProPlus 2021) doesn’t. Both can be activated using Ohook
-be activated using Ohook activation method.</p></li>
+activation method.</p></li>
 <li><p>Please note that in the official C2R office custom installation
 method, there is no ISO or any one-click solution available. Below is
-the simplest guide to installing the customized office.</p></li>
+the simplest guide to installing customized office.</p></li>
 <li><p>Russian users needs to follow <a
 href="bypass-russian-geoblock.html">this guide</a> to bypass geoblock in
 Office downloading.</p></li>
@@ -428,38 +428,38 @@ Office downloading.</p></li>
 </div>
 <div id="custom-installation-guide" class="section level2">
 <h2>Custom Installation Guide</h2>
-<p>First clear previous installation of Office,</p>
+<p>First, you’ll need to clear previous installations of Office. You can
+skip this if Office has never been installed on the machine before:</p>
 <ul>
-<li><p>Uninstall the office with App and Features option in Windows
+<li><p>Uninstall Office with the App and Features option in Windows
 settings.</p></li>
 <li><p>Run <code>OfficeScrubber.cmd</code> file from <a
 href="https://github.com/abbodi1406/WHD/raw/master/scripts/OfficeScrubber_11.7z">Office
 Scrubber</a> by abbodi1406 and select
-<code>[R] Remove all Licenses</code> option. You can skip this step if
+<code>[R] Remove all Licenses</code> option.</p></li>
-Office was never installed on the system.</p></li>
 </ul>
-<p>Once done,</p>
+<p>Once you’re done:</p>
 <ul>
 <li><p>Download <a
 href="https://officecdn.microsoft.com/pr/wsus/setup.exe">Office
 Deployment Tool</a> (ODT)</p></li>
 <li><p>Copy the downloaded <code>setup.exe</code> file to the root of
 the C drive, i.e. <code>C:\setup.exe</code></p></li>
-<li><p>Goto <a
+<li><p>Go to <a
 href="https://config.office.com/deploymentsettings">config.office.com</a></p></li>
 <li><p>If you want Retail Office then select
 <code>Microsoft 365 Apps for enterprise</code> in the office suites
 section.</p></li>
 <li><p>If you want Volume Office then select
-<code>Office LTSC Professional Plus 2021 - Volume License</code> (Don’t
+<code>Office LTSC Professional Plus 2021 - Volume License</code> in the
-select SPLA version) in the office suites section.</p></li>
+office suites section. (Don’t select the SPLA version)</p></li>
 <li><p>You can add Visio and Project apps if you need them. Don’t select
 language that is <a href="office_c2r_links.html">not available for
-Project/Visio</a> if you are installing these apps.</p></li>
+Project/Visio</a> if you are installing those apps.</p></li>
-<li><p>Customize other things and leave them as default where you don’t
+<li><p>Customize other things and leave settings as default if you don’t
 understand something.</p></li>
-<li><p>Once you go through all the options, click on the export button
+<li><p>Once you go through all the options, click on the export button,
-and it will download a file named
+select “Keep Current Settings” option and it will download a file named
 <code>Configuration.xml</code></p></li>
 <li><p>Copy the downloaded <code>Configuration.xml</code> file to the
 root of the C drive, i.e. <code>C:\Configuration.xml</code></p></li>

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@@ -411,46 +411,47 @@ div.tocify {
 <div id="notes" class="section level2">
 <h2>Notes</h2>
 <ul>
-<li><p><strong>If you are unsure what to download then</strong>,</p>
+<li><p><strong>If you are unsure what to download, then</strong>,</p>
 <ul>
 <li><p>Choose <strong>Office 365 ProPlus</strong>. MAS’s Ohook method
-can activate it and it will give you latest and most features
+can activate it and it will give you the latest and most features
 possible.</p></li>
 <li><p>Choose <strong>Online Installer</strong> <strong>x64</strong> as
-it will install latest version with minimum download data. Choose
+it will install the latest version of Office with minimum download data.
-Offline installer if you have unstable connection.</p></li>
+Choose Offline installer if you have an unstable internet
+connection.</p></li>
 </ul></li>
-<li><p>Below all links are original from Microsoft with Retail license
+<li><p>All of the below listed links are original from Microsoft with
-and Current update channel.</p></li>
+Retail license and Current update channel.</p></li>
-<li><p>Microsoft publish updates in these same links, there is no need
+<li><p>Microsoft publishes updates in these same links, that means there
-to update links.</p></li>
+isn’t any need to update the links.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>File size:</strong> C2R office installer files are
-unified. It means, for example Office 2021 ProPlus and Excel, onenote,
+unified. It means that for example, Office 2021 ProPlus, Excel, and
-all will have same size. Online installer consumes less data because it
+OneNote, will all have the same size. Online installer consumes less
-downloads only one architecture files whereas Offline file contains both
+data because it downloads files for only one system architecture whereas
-architectures.</p></li>
+Offline file contains both architectures.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>File version:</strong> Online installer always installs
 latest Office version whereas Offline version is often 5-6 months old
-and office will need updates once installed.</p></li>
+and Office will need updates once installed.</p></li>
-<li><p>To know the info about apps in a product suite, check <a
+<li><p>To get more info about apps in a product suite, check <a
 href="https://www.coolhub.top/tech-articles/products.html">here</a>.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>Don’t use</strong> offline links for Office 2013 because
-it’s too old and it’s installation can not be updated. Use online
+it’s too old and it’s installation cannot be updated. Use online
 installer if you need to use Office 2013.</p></li>
-<li><p><strong>Advanced uses:</strong> If you want customization in
+<li><p><strong>Advanced users:</strong> If you want to customize your
 Office installation or want pure Volume installation, use this <a
 href="office_c2r_custom.html">ODT method</a> of Office
 installation.</p></li>
-<li><p><strong>Troubleshoot:</strong></p>
+<li><p><strong>Troubleshooting:</strong></p>
 <ul>
-<li><p>Russian users needs to follow <a
+<li><p>Russian users need to follow <a
 href="bypass-russian-geoblock.html">this guide</a> to bypass geoblock in
 Office downloading.</p></li>
 <li><p>If the installer is showing an error related to signature then
 restart the system and try again.</p></li>
-<li><p>If it’s showing can’t install on selected updated channel or the
+<li><p>If it’s showing it can’t install on selected updated channel or
-error is due to leftovers of previously installed office then run Full
+there’s an error due to leftovers of previously installed office then
-scrub option in <a
+run Full Scrub option in <a
 href="https://github.com/abbodi1406/WHD/raw/master/scripts/OfficeScrubber_11.7z">Office
 Scrubber</a></p></li>
 </ul></li>

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@@ -414,28 +414,28 @@ div.tocify {
 <ul>
 <li><p>Office MSI means those Office files where installers are based on
 MSI and main difference from C2R is that it allows the users to choose
-which apps to install directly from the setup.exe. They have stopped
+which apps to install directly from setup.exe. They have stopped
-releasing Office MSI versions and last version was for 2016. From Office
+releasing Office MSI versions now, last Office MSI version was for 2016.
-2019 everything now is based on <a href="office_c2r_links.html">Office
+From Office 2019 everything now is based on <a
-C2R</a>. VL (Volume) means these Office versions can be activated with
+href="office_c2r_links.html">Office C2R</a>. VL (Volume) means these
-KMS.</p></li>
+Office versions can be activated with KMS.</p></li>
 <li><p>Microsoft provides download links of Office MSI VL versions on <a
 href="https://www.microsoft.com/licensing/ServiceCenter/default.aspx">VLSC</a>
 but for them, you need to pay a high subscription fee.</p></li>
-<li><p>For these reason, we need to host files on 3rd party. You can
+<li><p>For that reason, we need to host files on a 3rd party website.
-check <a
+You can check <a
 href="genuine-installation-media.html#How_to_verify_genuinity_of_files">here</a>
-on how to be sure that files are genuine. Office 2010, 2013, 2016 MSI VL
+on how to be sure that the files are genuine. Office 2010, 2013 and 2016
-files were released on VLSC only so you may find it hard to find
+MSI VL files were released on VLSC only, so you may find it hard to find
 checksums for them. You can download SHA-1 hashes list from <a
 href="https://pixeldrain.com/u/UcxBns92">here</a> for all below listed
 Office versions.</p></li>
-<li><p>You can activate all below listed 2010/2013/2016 Office files
+<li><p>You can activate all of the below listed 2010/2013/2016 Office
-with Online KMS option and 2013/2016 with Ohook option in MAS. To
+files with Online KMS option and 2013/2016 with Ohook option in MAS. To
-activate below listed Office 2007 Enterprise, you can use this key
+activate Office 2007 Enterprise, you can use this key
 <code>BQDQB-KRRY9-43DBR-4P9J4-DH7D8</code></p></li>
-<li><p>If you need links for any other Windows/office file, please
+<li><p>If you need links for any other Windows/office files, please
-contact <a href="https://discord.gg/gjJEfq7ux8">here</a>.</p></li>
+contact us <a href="https://discord.gg/gjJEfq7ux8">here</a>.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
 </div>