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@@ -405,30 +405,30 @@ href="https://github.com/abbodi1406/KMS_VL_ALL_AIO/">KMS_VL_ALL</a> or
 <h2>Reasons</h2>
 <ul>
 <li><p>Office Click-to-Run builds (since February 2021) that are
-activated with KMS checks the existence of the KMS server name in the
-registry. If KMS server is not present, a banner is shown in Office
+activated with KMS check the existence of the KMS server name in the
+registry. If the KMS server is not present, a banner is shown in Office
 programs notifying that “Office isn’t licensed properly”</p></li>
-<li><p>In case of 32-bit Office installed on 64-bit Windows, Office
-checks the KMS server existence in corresponding WOW6432Node registry
-key as well.</p></li>
-<li><p>Apart from this, they also detect if registered KMS server is in
-their blacklist or not. As far as I know, they blacklisted below 3
-addresses.</p>
+<li><p>In the case of 32-bit Office installed on 64-bit Windows, Office
+checks the KMS server existence in the corresponding WOW6432Node
+registry key as well.</p></li>
+<li><p>Apart from this, they also detect if a registered KMS server is
+on their blacklist or not. As far as I know, the below 3 addresses are
+blacklisted.</p>
 <p><code>km-s8.MSG-uides.com</code> <code>km-s9.MSG-uides.com</code>
 <code>0.0.0.0</code>(Remove hyphen)<br />
-First two are public KMS servers and last one in simple words is neither
-a public or private IP.</p></li>
-<li><p>Please note that these checks are not performed by Office if
-proper installation of Volume version of Office is done with
+The first two are public KMS servers and the last one in simple words is
+neither public nor private IP.</p></li>
+<li><p>Please note that these checks are not performed by Office if the
+proper installation of the Volume version of Office is done with
 Perpetual2019 / 2021 VL channel.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <hr />
 </div>
 <div id="solutions" class="section level2">
 <h2>Solutions:</h2>
-<p>Please find below various ways you can avoid this banner. Simplest
-option for you is to just use a Office activation tool mentioned
-here.</p>
+<p>Please find below various ways you can avoid this banner. The
+simplest option for you is to just use an Office activation tool
+mentioned here.</p>
 <hr />
 <div id="activation-tools" class="section level3">
 <h3>1- Activation Tools</h3>
@@ -441,17 +441,18 @@ href="https://github.com/abbodi1406/KMS_VL_ALL_AIO/">KMS_VL_ALL</a> or
 </div>
 <div id="manual-activation" class="section level3">
 <h3>2- Manual Activation</h3>
-<p>In this section I’m only going to mention how to setup KMS server in
-registry properly.</p>
+<p>In this section, I’m only going to mention how to set up the KMS
+server in the registry properly.</p>
 <ul>
 <li><p><strong>If using Public KMS server:</strong><br />
-Since they can put any public KMS server in blacklist, as a permanent
-solution, we can instead use server IP instead of hostname.</p></li>
+Since they can put any public KMS server on the blacklist, as a
+permanent solution, we can instead use server IP instead of
+hostname.</p></li>
 <li><p><strong>If using private KMS server IP:<br />
 </strong>Make sure to use a valid private IP address.</p></li>
 </ul>
-<p>Please find below how to set the KMS server address in registry.
-Example with a private IP <code>10.0.0.10</code></p>
+<p>Please find below how to set the KMS server address in the registry.
+For example with a private IP <code>10.0.0.10</code></p>
 <pre><code>reg delete &quot;HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\0ff1ce15-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663&quot; /f
 
 reg delete &quot;HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\0ff1ce15-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663&quot; /f /reg:32
@@ -463,10 +464,11 @@ reg add &quot;HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtecti
 </div>
 <div id="install-vl-office" class="section level3">
 <h3>3- Install VL Office</h3>
-<p>As mentioned in reasons section, these checks are performed only if
-Retail Office is installed and later converted to VL. Office doesn’t
-perform any such checks if proper installation of VL office is done.</p>
-<p>Please find below guide on how to properly install Volume C2R
+<p>As mentioned in the reasons section, these checks are performed only
+if Retail Office is installed and later converted to VL. The office
+doesn’t perform any such checks if the proper installation of the VL
+office is done.</p>
+<p>Please find below a guide on how to properly install Volume C2R
 Office.</p>
 <p><strong>Clear previous installation of Office:</strong></p>
 <ul>
@@ -478,14 +480,14 @@ Scrubber</a> (<a
 href="https://github.com/abbodi1406/WHD/tree/master/scripts">Mirror</a>)
 by abbodi1406 and reboot the system.<br />
 Full Scrub is optional, you can skip this step if you want to save
-outlook related data.<br />
+outlook-related data.<br />
 It’s recommended to at-least run <code>Remove_Licenses.cmd</code> file
 from this package.</p></li>
 </ul>
 <p><strong>Install Office 2021 VL with Official method:</strong></p>
 <p>Please note that in the official VL office installation method, there
-is no ISO or any one click solution available. Below is the simplest
-guide to install VL office.</p>
+is no ISO or any one-click solution available. Below is the simplest
+guide to installing VL office.</p>
 <ul>
 <li><p>Download <a
 href="https://officecdn.microsoft.com/pr/wsus/setup.exe">Office
@@ -496,9 +498,9 @@ the C drive, i.e. <code>C:\setup.exe</code></p></li>
 href="https://config.office.com/deploymentsettings">config.office.com</a></p></li>
 <li><p>Select
 <code>Office LTSC Professional Plus 2021 - Volume License</code> in the
-office suites section. You can add Visio and Project apps if you need.
-Customize other things and leave as default where you don’t understand
-something.</p></li>
+office suites section. You can add Visio and Project apps if you need
+them. Customize other things and leave them as default where you don’t
+understand something.</p></li>
 <li><p>Once you go through all the options, click on the export button
 and it will download a file named
 <code>Configuration.xml</code></p></li>
@@ -520,7 +522,7 @@ your preferred method.</p>
 non-genuine banners won’t appear by default.</p></li>
 <li><p>Before doing this, make sure your Office update channel is either
 Insider or Current.</p></li>
-<li><p>Make sure Internet is connected</p></li>
+<li><p>Make sure the Internet is connected</p></li>
 <li><p>Open command prompt as admin and enter below lines and press
 enter,</p></li>
 </ul>